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On page 4 were goku complements videl, goku has 2 mouths, a side mouth and and forward mouth.

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He uses Kaio-ken glibness

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I'm sorry. i lost it and laughed hard enough to snort when Goku said she looked nice.
As if he would EVER notice clothes, lol.

Edit: Downvoted for telling the truth again, huh?
In Super, Goku didn't even know what a 'kiss' was. He had zero notice of beauty in any way.

Last edited on 06 September 2020, 13:57.

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@blueroy Its the style I use, side of lips exposed but the mouth is drawn slightly angled.

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I just want to say, no matter what direction this comic goes in, I appreciate you for drawing Goku's tail hole.

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I like when a new Videl hentai shows up (I had a crush on her when I was a kid). But I really do hate when they give her massive, ugly watermelons.

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i feel there is a missing section between 4-5

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@ManOfEvil93 Yes. The full comic is on my patreon. I only publically post samples and random pages to show my progress to fans. I even withhold pages deliberately until full publication.

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Well this is surprisingly good, I did not expect I'd be into Videl x Goku, but I love it!

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GRANDE GODKU1!!

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Page 4 Goku mouth error.

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This gallery has become invisible for some reason...
You can't find it on the site through the searching bar.
Weird.

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@Renan
Same for the one that has Gohan kicking the snot out of Bra in a tournament fight. I went looking for it when this one popped up, but it no longer shows up even if I search just for 'gohan'.

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@ssj782 It seems it's no longer "invisible" now... If you click on the artist's tag, you can find it no problem.

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Videl was a virgin at the start of this but 1 week later and she's sharing a bed with Gohan?

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With the second to last page, will there be a sister story where we see Gohan cheating on Videl with Chi-Chi? And possibly a third story featuring a grand incestuous orgy to welcome Videl into the Son family?

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Is it finished ?

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your art's really good, I wish you would ink though

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The lack of french kissing is impressive.

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@animedingo That was her intention at the beginning of the story. She wanted to take things further.

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@robypoo - Thank your for the compliment. It takes me a while to colour, so I'm trying to figure out a way to ink them so they stand out.

@Renan Wilheart - No, the comic isn't finished, if we're talking the Bonus Pages. I'll be uploading them later on my patreon.

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@TheWriteFiction - I was actually wondering whether we will get to see Videl all swollen with Goku's child or not ?
Pregnant sex is something I personally find really hot.

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Kek Chi-Chi and Gohan sleep talking. Kinda glad the artist didn't do Gohan dirty, he gets to have a threesome and fuck his mother...probably.

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