raw is https://e-hentai.org/g/1797567/5cfc28f188/
sorry for any mistakes, thx...
i noticed the sentences in page 19 is kinda hard to read..., letters to long but no spaces to write it horizontally :(

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This is what the original manga should have been...

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can't wait for part 4

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What i really like about this series of doujinshi is that it feels that the author really like the original manga and that the events depicted in them can fit almost naturally in the timeline of the work it is based on.

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I understand that this hack author of the original series won't even go that far... But we were expecting something after he gave us all these fucking masturbation shots of Kazuya.

I'm probably one of the few who took the liberty and did our own alternate reality of this bullshit.

https://www.pixiv.net/user/58113552/series/98104

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I am not sure which of these two is more of an idiot

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@letherio You need to level your scans. The actual doujin isn't supposed to look like this.
I'll level page 2 to show you what it's supposed to look like: https://puu.sh/GZsPj/9ad97b6e93.png

This is a guide that will teach you how to level scans: http://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/1.html#3. Everything I did in the demonstration image is all related to that same tutorial, the same one I learned from when I was first starting out.

When you eventually do that, you'll also want to save your files in greyscale and export them as a 32 or 64-color B/W PNG to cut your filesize, which you can learn how to do so in 6 steps:

1.) This file's in RGB color by default, circled in green: https://puu.sh/GQDIS/d06e7b5d38.png
2.) Showing you how to change from RGB color to greyscale: https://puu.sh/GQDNH/2f7cec4ad9.png
3.) Discard color data to change: https://puu.sh/GQDOf/353dee9762.png
4.) Now the file's in greyscale, circled in green: https://puu.sh/GQDQw/e918d2f029.png
5.) Using the export to web option: https://puu.sh/GQDSu/8bc322505f.png
6.) Export settings for 32-color B/W PNGs: https://puu.sh/GQDXR/4e507aad3a.png

As for the vertical typesetting on page 19, I'd simply rotate the image 90 degrees and typeset horizontally, then revert back to normal. It's also not ideal, but at least it keeps the sentence structure in one piece.

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ah, i forgot about levelling the pages, lol.... i thought the raw itself is acceptable, but after i saw your leveled pages, it became so much sharper..... maybe next time...
page 19, u were right, i didn't think of that either...

btw i dont have photoshop, i use gimp, but ill do somehow for the next one

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Make this canon instead the shitty mess Reiji is creating

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I'm not even mad at the ending lol! It's still 100x better than the official material and it fits his character.

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No, any sane man wouldnt take the confession of someone working as a "rental girlfriend" seriously.

Or rather it wouldnt mean anything in the first place because of her line of work...

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This version is so much better than the actual serialized manga. Can't believe hentai artist is actually fixing the story. Honestly the premise of rent a girl friend could have been a really good love story. The story is basically similar to a fake marriage, but its so convoluted with a shitty MC.

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