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[Oojinushi (Ryuuta)] Uyokyokusetsu Arimashita | We've Been Through a Lot [English] [Gondis]

[おおじ主 (竜太)] 紆余曲折ありました [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2020-12-25 20:47
Parent:1807397
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Language:English  TR
File Size:9.56 MiB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:1720 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.53

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Posted on 25 December 2020, 20:47 by:   Gondi    PM
Uploader Comment
This is my first translation on here, so I hope you like it!
Any feedback would be most appreciated.
For any inquiries etc. please send me an email at: translationdump@gmail.com

EDIT: Cleared up some mess and fixed a few typos.
Posted on 24 December 2020, 02:49 by:   Gondi    PM
Score +56
Posted on 24 December 2020, 03:08 by:   legnakrad    PM
Score +109
Ryuuta is a blessing.
Posted on 24 December 2020, 03:57 by:   Fate Averruncus    PM
Score +71
For a first attempt this was solid. I don't often praise first timers, but you've earned it.
Posted on 24 December 2020, 04:27 by:   schneebly    PM
Score +87
This was very good for a first translation. Good job Gondi, I hope to see more from you in the future.
Posted on 24 December 2020, 09:08 by:   Kira10    PM
Score +30
based Ryuuta! thanks for TL m(_ _)m
Posted on 24 December 2020, 15:15 by:   Anklaf    PM
Score +19
jesus christ. When was the last time we saw a ryuuta work translated here?
Posted on 25 December 2020, 06:16 by:   BZo1480    PM
Score +17
@Anklaf Literally last week, lmao.
Posted on 25 December 2020, 18:37 by:   Ass Spanker    PM
Score +59
Hmmmmmm. Solid attempt for your first work, but there are things to improve on.

Editing: Don't just throw the text box in, clean out the bubbles entirely first. You can see leftover text in almost every page. Some bubbles have text too close to the border, which makes it look cluttered. Missing border on big bubbles like フア!? in pg. 10 should be redrawn in, else it'll look very jarring.

Translation: There are still errors here and there, I will only show a few examples:
- pg. 9: missing 's' in "embarrassing"
- pg. 10: umaibo'u'
- pg. 15: "Am I not seeing me as a woman?" ?????
- pg. 16: missing punctuations
- pg. 21: have always "tried to"
There are a lot more but excuse my lazy ass.
Posted on 26 February 2021, 14:34 by:   imthedouchebag    PM
Score +7
She is adorable.
Posted on 16 March 2021, 05:47 by:   Juggernaut Santa    PM
Score +48
Ahh yes, the usual "I like you, so why didn't you confess to me?", lol.

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