Kaya takes up an assignment to assassinate a minor nobleman who's been making trouble for the common people of an unknown plane. Disaster strikes, however, when the nobleman is somehow able to deactivate Kaya's innate phasing and planeswalker abilities, trapping her in a wall mid-phase! What dastardly plans does this villain have for our hero?
Mostly a lot of rape, apparently.
Anyways, this is my first time making a comic of any sorts, so I just want to make a few things clear. 1. Yes, this is about as good as I can muster and I am aware how mediocre it is. Not in a "Oh dear, I'm so shy about my work, it's so bad, haha" kind of way. More in a "There are many technical errors, poorly implemented techniques, and general lack of consistency" kind of way. That's fine. I'm fairly new to this, my intention is to improve. 2. This was more of an acid test to see what exactly it takes to make these kinds of comics and what aspects of creation I need to practice more on (hint: it's a lot). The only way to know where you need to improve is to put effort into something and see where it comes up short, after all. 3. Hands, feet, clothes, faces, coloring, shading (absent cause bad shading is worse than no shading, in my opinion), these are all things I'm aware are quite not good. That said, I'm actually fairly happy with how the smuttier aspects came out (dicks, semen, kaya's body, writing, etc). So focus on these areas if you have any constructive criticism please. Or fuckin' tear the whole thing apart, it's the internet, you do you. Hopefully at least some of you get some use out of this. Cheers.