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This one didn't take long since the text was already deleted by gansta.

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Base +36, Walt Jizzney +5, firedragon89 +14

The textless version is not exactly clean so I would recommend running a quick pass before pasting in the text. Right from page 3 I can see a bubble with some left over text, then a couple bubbles with missing border, obviously from careless use of the rectangular tool. Pg 14 typo: "each other"

Base +23, firedragon89 +14

on page 15 in the bottom right panel we can clearly see the swimsuit has been pushed to saber's left while in every other panel the swimsuit is clearly pushed to saber's right? what are we reader's supposed to surmise, that this is some kind of magical swimsuit that can teleport? Or perhaps it can pass through flesh, and if that was the case, why not just have sex through the swimsuit?

3/10

Base +7, Walt Jizzney -5, BGummyBear +6, darienkd -9, Natsam -14, The Inker -8, Teh_Red_Guy -11, DJ_Puchuu +14, Tridentking1 +6, lilnuggie +6, Lakshmi-translations -6