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[Q Doujin] Bakunyuu Heroine no Harem Rakuen | Harem Paradise With Big Breasted Heroines (One Piece) [English]

[Q同人] 爆乳ヒロインのハーレム楽園 (ワンピース) [英訳]

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Posted:2021-01-10 15:11
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:28.09 MiB
Length:27 pages
Favorited:683 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.40

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Posted on 10 January 2021, 16:55 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +98
A few suggestions on your typesetting:

1. Try using the same font size throughout as much as possible. Having different font sizes on a single page make it a bit more difficult to read because your eyes have to keep adjusting all the time.
2. Use larger font sizes only when certain words or phrases are particularly emphasized.
3. You don't need to fill up the entire word bubble with text. Leave a generous amount of white space around the borders to make it look less cluttered.

On the plus side, your use of different colors on Page 17 to show which girl was speaking -- especially on the "joint speech" bubble -- was a clever touch.
Posted on 10 January 2021, 20:09 by:   carlosxuyu    PM
Score +21
Thank you for your good work. I like it very much
Posted on 11 January 2021, 11:48 by:   peg4sus    PM
Score +6
who is the author?
Posted on 13 January 2021, 00:13 by:   DarthTitan    PM
Score +4
Q Doujin guy lol
Posted on 14 January 2021, 18:05 by:   jkon19    PM
Score +4
We need the Rebecca and viola and the carrot solo one
Posted on 14 February 2021, 03:10 by:   DarthTitan    PM
Score +4
Do happen to have this one? 海で見かけた爆乳美女
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ301105.html
Posted on 04 May 2021, 08:25 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +60
Cool. But can you share the RAW too?

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