https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86985452

The art is good, and the mc is easily ignorable. Still, it's kinda hard to rate this one highly, especially when you see the mc go super saiyan or whatever the hell that was.

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damn, he went SS2 with all!!! Those goblins are screwed, is gonna be like the cell Jrs

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People usually become better writers over time, but because this guys reacts with such hostility to criticism, he's somehow getting worse.

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@ficfactor actual criticism is fine and dandy and I have no problem reading them and taking them into consideration. I get criticized for H Quest on twitter and discord all the time and they give out some good pointers.. If your only excuse for "criticism" is "the story is bad" or "the mc is a self-insert" without any proper analysis or explanation, that is not criticism but an biased opinion.

Last edited on 12 January 2021, 14:32.

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On patreon, you promised a Fairy Tail story and then when you got a whole bunch of patrons, revealed that it would focus on your OC. Everyone hated it, and you admitted it at the time. You even promised to make a new Fairy Tail story. Then you backtracked, and tacitly promoted bullying of everyone on your patreon that had a problem with your super amazing original character.
As I recall, you said criticism or your OC was personal criticism. But he's a not a self-insert, right? Because he's Japanese (with a highly detailed Sonic OC-tier backstory you wrote, and tons of art you drew of him, despite you claiming you weren't attached to him). I still can't believe you think that a self-insert doesn't count if it isn't the same race as you.

When I gave you feedback on patreon, you kicked me off. Then you were hilariously banned because you insisted on having your self insert fuck a loli.

When I criticised you here much later, you sent me multiple PMs on DeviantArt whining about how you were actually banned from patreon for loli rather than shota, so technically I identified you as the wrong kind of pedo. You also, without a shred of irony, said I simply don't have the comprehension to understand what a good character your OC is.

So, I checked in to see if you'd maybe improved . That is not the case.

Just so you know, that OC reads like it was written by a fourteen year old boy trying to live out his wish fulfillment fantasy with his favourite characters. You literally have the main girls praise and fawn over your own self-insert, and talk about how cool and what great lover he is.

,,,,Actually, I take back what I said earlier. It's more like it was written by a twelve year old.

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First off, don't confuse whining with setting a record straight about spreading misinformation.

You can make your rant as long as you want about a parody should be handled, but you never understood why I made H Quest. I make H Quest for the sole purpose of shits and giggles, no make-a-wish self-insertion plays anything into this. Hell, I'll admit it, this is probably one of the worst chapters I've made, worse than Ch. 1 & 5's original. Also, H Quest is NOT A ONE-MAN SHOW, I put fans and critics suggestions/ideas into the story because I want to satisfy them. Hell, some of my irl friends give me suggestions just for the hell of it. I'm not doing for my "self-inserting wishes" as you keep claiming, I wrote the other girls praising and fawn over him because it's funny and there are actual people that does like Edate and him having a harem whether people like you approve of the idea or not.

If I'm writing this story like a twelve year old, who cares? I'm having fun, the fans like it. It's a win-win.

Let's say this, if I insert as Edate as you always claim, do you really think I would want Lucy in my harem?!?! SHE'S MY LEAST FAVORITE CHARACTER IN THE ENTIRE SERIES!! Why would I write myself having sex with a character I absolutely detest? I have no problem drawing Lucy because she's very easy to draw, but the thought of having sex with her, my fingers are trembling in literal anger from the thought of it.

Also, you seem to forget that this is a parody, it's not made to be taken seriously. I don't ever remember saying you simply don't have the comprehension to understand what a good character my OC is. I'm talking about OCs in general because you're going around posting other people's work and not making your own. So don't come at me about writing a "good" or "bad" story until you actually make your own, then you can ride that high horse all day long.

I already said I don't give a shit of what you people call him, call him a self-insert, or a bad character all you want. It's pretty numb to me now. I'm doing this for fun.
I've already decided to take a break from H Quest for a while to work on my own manga and other doujinshi.

If you ever actually want to talk like actual adults, I would love to talk to you during my streams via Discord vc

@Pakom I apologize on behalf of both Ficfactor and I for flooding the comment section with this nonsense.

Last edited on 13 January 2021, 16:44.

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decide it already, you use that oc because its fun or because there is people asking you to do it?

you care about what people think or you dont?

you are trying to improve or its not nessesary because its a parody?

Edate is a mage or a saiyan?

inserting your oc because its fun; inserting lucy, a character you hate, because... people asked for it?

First you say you hear people and you wanna improve, its not a "one-man show"; then you say "I´m doing this for fun".

A shitty opinion given by some ill-mannered bastard is more adult than your contradictions. And I dont think that´s a shitty opinion: less alien oc = better history. "the manga would be better without that oc" is a fucking good valid opinion with remmarkable argument.

"The oc feels like a self-insert, I dont like it" <--- good internet opinion with argument
"The oc is not a self-insert because I hate lucy" <----- stupid argument, also a lie

"I see what you guys say, but I dont really care that much I will keep doing it" <---- jerk with your fans but honest and very free #respect
"I see what you guys say, and I really care about you but I will keep doing it" <--- jerk with your fans and dishonest and childish #12yo

Seriusly, idk what "fun" means anymore...

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>2021
>Yaichi is STILL pushing his Gohan knockoff OC with the FT cast even after the initial Patreon backlash and getting taken off Patreon for shota sex
>chooses to redo the entire thing after 5 chapters are out, doesn't remove the OC who was the only negative aspect of the original HQ
>there are commissioned doujins that have been in the backlog for 4 years now
LOL

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Lmao this shit is fucking hilarious

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Eh, this parody and Yaichi's OC is actually a masterpiece compared to...OTHERS I can think of

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I love he pretends not to be care what people think when they critisize his lame self-interest then gets butthurt and comes on here to argue. Then goes crying back to his twitter to his 4 fanboys so they can fellate him with praise. This candy ass will probably just say fuck it and quit H-quest since he's shown zero interest in updating it in a while. Then again that fits with his usual work ethic.

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@Dangthatman2057 What work ethic? That phrase isn't even in Yaichi's vocabulary, he's never finished anything and keeps making empty promises that he never follows through on.

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