RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1798937/a724095d0c/

Chinese translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/1807749/376cafe09a/

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fuck 24 pages is too short for a 4some with mom+daughter combo

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Not bad but the editing is kind of lazy.

Try to at least redraw some of the easy stuff, like the thought bubble in page 16.
Also, leave some space between the edge of the speech bubble and your text.
Try to use more than just one font throughout. Ink free is a great font, but it isn’t the be all end all font.

Also, page 9, “It seems like your about to” should be “you’re”.

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Does the prostitution tag count in this, since it was a ruse to get the two together

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*last page*

is this a personal attack or something ?

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Downvote the shimaidon tag. They arent sisters.

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I'm a freeloader. Fuck you gonn du about it, HUUUUUUUHHH?! Take what you can! GIVE NOTHING BACK! ARRRR!

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