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(C95) [Service Heaven (Azukiko)] Seishun Buta Yarou X Mai X Tomoe (Seishun Buta Yarou wa Bunny Girl Senpai no Yume o Minai) [English] [Incomplete]

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Posted:2021-01-29 05:00
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Language:English  TR
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Posted on 29 January 2021, 05:00 by:   animefan71109    PM
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=============== WARNING: This translation is incomplete!!! ================
See this link for another translator's full translation!
https://e-hentai.org/g/1913617/f344e821e0/
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Source Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/1357418/da2c0a0f3c/

I only translated the parts featuring best girl Rio Futaba ♥♥♥, so if someone else wants to do a proper complete translation please do and get this replaced.

There's one other untranslated doujin starring Rio Futaba left on this site. Due to the text being difficult to read, I do not plan to work on it.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1353598/4a95cb5310/

Other English translated titles featuring Rio Futaba:
https://e-hentai.org/g/1834129/44747e8ad2/
https://e-hentai.org/g/1618101/534f09c596/
https://e-hentai.org/g/1832043/9f132e4a22/
https://e-hentai.org/g/1349237/eec46bb462/
https://e-hentai.org/g/1331017/e177fb2f1f/
Posted on 29 January 2021, 07:29 by:   nabusco    PM
Score +149
I commend your dedication but you could had literally translated 2 more pages and would be a complete one, cmon bruh.
Posted on 29 January 2021, 09:27 by:   aleden    PM
Score +162
@nabusco
There was around 10 pages untranslated. It's more like this was basically the raw, just with 4 pages (and a page with no dialogue) translated.

OP, honestly I'm not one to complain about translations if I can read some of it (others are better at critique for editing stuff like ancient-alien, and lots of other people here can help with translations, and whatnot so I leave that to the experts) but yeah, might annoy quite a few people. If it was a few pages, well, ok - but the majority of the book goes untranslated. I do really love Rio myself so I do get it if you don't have time for the other stuff and wanted to share what you did do, so thanks for that. It is just on some level always a bit unfortunate to get partial translations uploaded.
Posted on 17 March 2021, 16:58 by:   hijikato    PM
Score +57
I don't want to sound rude, but I think it would have been better if you didn't uploaded this if you didn't plan to translate the whole Doujin to begin with. I know Futaba is your waifu, but the amount you've translated is not even enough to understand what's going on.

That, or rephrase the title, as it's VERY misleading. When I read [English] [Incomplete], I'm expecting that not the full story is included in the work, but the pages that are included, have been translated to english.

Or, lastly, you could have uploaded ONLY THE PAGES YOU'VE TRANSLATED, and include in the title [English] [Incomplete] [Futaba scenes only].

You see, the biggest problem of you uploading in this format is that some other people, that probably would liked to translate this, can not look inside, just look the title and say "Oh, somebody already translated it to english, but it says incomplete... but it has the total page count of the raw doujin... they must have forgot to remove that tag. Well, moving on." Uploading only the pages you translated helps understand better that this is not a completely fully done job.

Again, I didn't want to offend you or be rude, your other full translation works are amazingly well done, and I'll probably keep them in favorites to take a read later, it's just my opinion.

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