Thanks to the anon that translated this and did the typeset

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1632718/769a597a09/

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For a moment I thought was Amagi Brilliant Park

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This translation is pretty stiff. The typesetting is also kinda lame.

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based troons

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Good timing as her birthday I think is today or so.

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Not sure what lines you disliked/you mean by the stiff TL, bilinked - unless you're reading from the RAWs in JP as well and mean that it was a bit stiff of a translation, in which case I can't comment (my JP isn't that good) but I mean, the script was pretty standard for these types of books. Nothing we haven't seen before, albeit there are a few lines where the grammar could be fixed up (e.g - "I think we've had is quite enough of this"). The typesetting was basic too, a lot of stuff have similar fonts, but I'm no expert. Definitely could've been a lot worse. Maybe ancient-alien or one of the other few users who know a lot about editing/typesetting work can comment more?

This was pretty good stuff. Love the way Housubaru drew Swiftsure. Straightforward, but really nice plot. Cute and sexy. Thanks for the upload OP.

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>Jamaica isn't brown
That's an L.

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