enjoy

I'm gonna coom

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So he moved on. Good for him/.

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Kinda meh tbh

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So he somehow managed to create a worse ending than the other ntr story... An ending where everyone moves on and no one wins

I didn't like the zakari ending but at least the writer went all out creating a new type of cuck ending (even if it stupid) here it's just a useless ending

No one confesses to their crush while clearly still interested. And they just move on? Waste. No vanilla ending no ntr ending

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男主感觉不怎么惨，甚至赚了（滑稽）

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I aint even mad. Glasses chick was superior from the very start IMO

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I whole lot of nothing in the end, at first in the beginning it looks like the siblings were plotting something but without the POV from the other characters this just kind of feels empty. I get that there’s supposed to be this feeling of moving on between chitose and the MC but I just don’t really feel that, also it felt like taka was trying to show how lewd she became. The early part of the story also made it seem like the siblings were aware of hori and chitose’s feelings

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Wish they could've done also the swinging route

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这什么玩意。。。

Base +6, vexist +6

tldr life sucks

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没内味儿了

Base +6, scf123 +7, Retjj +6

千岁的那个吻应该是给了一个自己对男主藏在心底深处小小感情的交代吧 吻别之后就跟这感情做个了断了 男主也看开了 还有了憧憬他专门找上门的小学妹 也还行吧 酸甜苦辣才是人生

Last edited on 05 February 2021, 17:32.

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男主从头到尾都被姐姐玩弄在股掌之间，姐姐用自己的身体帮弟弟打助攻最后还全身而退，最后送个妹子有点强行好结局

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一时间看傻了，仔细想想也挺好的，反正也没指望了还不如看开。

不过怎么说呢，虽然有女二这个时不时来点奇妙的出戏吐槽的存在，千岁这部作品开头还是老套的女主跟苦主搞暧昧，结果没贞操观念直接被第三者上的套路，最后结局没有继续落入俗套走这种正常向的生活还在继续的剧情，反而会有种特别奇怪的感觉。倒不是说不好，只是前面铺垫的那些比如说堀的告白啊，千岁在他在场的时候被干会更兴奋啊，诸如此类的细节伏笔，就显得很突兀了。本来千岁系列这么受欢迎一方面就是这种纠结的心态吧，最后突然就大家全员都看开了，emmmmm

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結局有夠普通的。
我比較喜歡第一二話

Base +6, atomicpuppy +49, 三千梦 +9, thefiend2008 -6

男主从千岁嘴里尝到自己鸡儿的味道，突然悟了

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这都是啥啊，sex场景太少了，白期待这么久了，唉:-(，不过也算是完结了，还是期待老师下一作的。

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It feels kind of empty without knowing what characters are thinking, but I suppose it's nice to have a protagonist that moves on for once.

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Ehh, really lame ending for me. But I guess it's better than him being a beta cuck so yay I guess.

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I still want to know what happen in the hotel post ch3

also I really wish to see Mika in action one more time but it is what it is

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literally me

Base +6, OBV +13

这个男主在世徒老师的笔下已经算是挺不错的了，看开了也有可能收获一段更加美好的爱情，比起为了撸的情节，都第五话了能这样收尾我个人倒是挺喜欢的。

Base +6, scf123 +7

Time to avoid the NTR thread on /h/ for another month as they breakdown frame by frame for another 11 threads.

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I had said it before, there was just no way he could end the story satisfactorily in just 4 chapters, specially trying to please everyone (just read his Twitter account, for months he had so many people asking him to not making a NTR or to let him end with Chitose...) It's still a good story, there were just too many expectations on it.

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雖然NTR的感覺下降了 ま〜這走向個人也不討厭XD

Base +6, Retjj +6

The only truly cucked was us huh?

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就这？就这？这烂尾我服了，最后强行搞个学妹也不知道想表达什么
连载这么久就这么草草收场，遗憾

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我感觉故事并非上品，发展过于生硬，结局强行升华，我思考了一阵，最开始我认为「R18」这个创作题材的限制，再细想发现是世徒世界观里莫名其妙的贞操观的问题
举个例子，水龙敬的「枪间家」和「乐园」系列里感觉不到任何NTR要素，因为大家都是碧池，再反观「千岁」，女主是「白莲花」却没有贞操观(以前的作品中也大抵如此)，表白以后立即口交性交多人运动也不遑多让，但是这种发展下最后竟是HE，这些反差是我觉得不妥的原因，这种HE不应该出现在只想着透批的黄毛学弟和看不出真喜欢还是被透爽了的女主之间，在各种方面都非常跳跃

Base +6, 三千梦 +9, any2367 +6

>imagine expecting good writing from Seto Yuuki.
lmao just admit you're in for the art, a non ending where it doesn't end as neither vanilla or netorare. This subverted expectations like a Disney movie lol.

Anyway, glasses girl Mika was the best character and I'm fine she is cool.

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牛本变纯爱，我不能接受。牛呢？牛呢？

Base +6, Retjj +6, 三千梦 +9

这剧情真的有点迷，前面很多伏笔都没填。

抛开剧情不说，世徒画的这两套衣服好好看。

Base +6, Retjj +6

Ok ending for me, could have gone way worse. With only 4 chapters there wasn't much you can do without being an actual professional story writer.

For once I appreciate that our protagonist moved on into chad route. He will eventually find a new Chitose, hell there's already one girl fangirling for him in this very chapter.
Imho not seto's best but still decent one. (especially egregious chitose facial expression)

would rate a solid 7.

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Loved this story tbh. Reminded me of my teenage years, there were girls I was crazy about and they weren't pure as driven snow or any of that shit. We'd be getting wasted and one of my mates would come in with a big grin on his face 'cause he just got a bj off a girl I like. I'd get a bit dissolutioned at first but then things would go well and I'd end up banging another lass from our group with one of my other mates.
Kinda had a nice bitter sweet realism to it for me.

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说实话这一切都是姐姐导演的 这个幕后黑手没被调教成rbq怎么也算不上好结局

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BRUH
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Base +10, Blacknex +6

Imagine getting NTR'ed by the author? Man, I feel bad.

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I was pretty sure it was going to turn out this way. It would have felt more satisfying if they at least spoke about it, admitted they had both had feelings for each other, but because they were both too passive they missed their chance and now it's too late. Then it wouldn't feel as frustrating when they move on afterwards. To be fair though, this is how it more likely to end up in reality. If they were able to talk about it properly, it wouldn't have ended up this way in the first place. They pretty much knew how the other felt (even if they were too afraid of being mistaken to act on it) so it's not like they could tell each other anything they didn't already know.
Ah well. At least the sex scene was good. I loved how Seto drew her expressions and showed them from his PoV. She made a sexy fucked silly face. That double blowjob was amazing too. Even if you hate how the story turned out, you gotta at least admire the art~

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Life is life. Good ending? Bad ending? Who cares, this is how life goes.

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In the parallel world,Hori stopped Takayuki before he had sex with Chitose and proclaimed his love for her publicly,
so Takayuki can only have sex with Mika,
after that Chitose became a couple with Hori.
In this chapter they go to karaoke,
finally,Takayuki can kiss Chitose and get blowjob by her.
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Last edited on 06 February 2021, 09:22.

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I liked the story a lot myself. In the end he steeled himself, relaxed and learned to let go, moved on and received new something in return by the end.
Life... it's often not about what we want. It could be a girl like Chitose. It could be a job opportunity, a item we desire, the life of a loved one, or anything really. They may seem so close and within reach yet in a split second it may be torn away from us. It's alright to grief and mourn our loss, but in the end we have to move on and learn to take opportunities as they arrive rather than cling on to vague dreams. More often than not better things are bound to come our way.

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ALTERNATIVE FINAL

Takayuki slips as he takes Chitose from behind, bangs his head on the coffee table and dies.
Chitose gets thrown right on Hori's cock, it comes at her and gets her pregnant.
From that day on, Hori promised to make both Chitose and Mika happy.

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Man, I was hoping for more sex for the last chapter. Oh well, it was all still pretty good and I hope this all gets animated someday. Loved the faces Chitose made.

Base +6, YellowYuppie +6, nack_star +6, 海想列車 +23, atomicpuppy +49

I don't mind this kind of ending but god the sex scenes are unsatisfying. Not even one good nakadashi scene, just like that zakari one. Heck, that zakari one was better considering it has normal censorship instead of full whiteout. Also very unsatisfying nakadashi scene here that the hottest page does not contain sex scene at all.

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I guess this is fine My only gripe is that there was no sex with Mika just a BJ I hope that there is a bonus chap with Mika or the fangirl in like 6 months. story-wise I could take it or leave it I generally don't like NTR but because it is Seto Yuki and I love their style, only wanted more Mika

Base +7, atomicpuppy +49

Good ending. Dude acted like a real man should. If she rejects you after you tell her how you feel(like she did Hori). Keep it civil when you cross paths, but leave her alone, stop chasing, and move on. Anyone who would tell you otherwise has no shame or pride and is more than happy to make an ass of himself.

Last edited on 06 February 2021, 05:44.

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I liked it. Dude got to the girl he liked first so just move on. There's enough girls out there.

Base +6, bowzie +6, LurkingLilFaggot +6, AkibaHole +6

God damn it .. I just want another Mika hotel chapter and it skipped like this.

Base +7, lkoofu +9, atomicpuppy +49

How is this realistic? Dood, in real world having sex with someone you don't love doesn't mean you should date them. Though, this last chapter feels so much disjointed from the rest, I don't know what Seto was trying to achieve with this story. Chitose was more like a sex doll rather than a human being.

Base +6, deadarm +6, JJT5 +5, viniccius36 +5, S-pan +14, CxHxA +6

Happy ending? Holy shit im cooming

Base +6

不錯吧，只是沒什麼嚕點罷了，倒是故事性是可以的，沒有甚麼特別故意要刺激觀眾感官的劇情，再說白點 就是不為了讓你看爽而弄會讓你爽的劇情。

Base +6, 您好謝謝大家 -4

If You see The history From the Start The brothers Plan to Hook up chitose with the brother but the thing you learn from this is something that can happen in youth days

he was scared to tell her what he feel (friend Zone) so when he realize it was too late and so later on he move on seeing how things have changed Literaly this can happen in real life

That girl i like Back in School I dont see her same way i meet people she meet people she change and i just remember her as a beautifull girl (cuz now she is Fat as fuck) i end up having sex with her bestie thou

Base +13

I liked it tbh. Kind of bittersweet. Made me feel things.

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@kawa34567 No, in an alternate world, Chitose would have had a mind of her own and told Mika to show Taka herself if she wanted to show her brother how it was done so much. Also, this leads into my other point...Taka and Mika wouldn't be fucking. Taka wants his sister...but Mika isn't into that at all or it would have happened already(and we know it didn't because Taka didn't even know what her body looked like until Hori sent him their sex pictures).

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