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Black clover

Western
Posted:2021-02-12 14:00
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:15.97 MiB
Length:40 pages
Favorited:30 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.31

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Posted on 12 February 2021, 16:34 by:   atasitian    PM
Score -57
Justification for "poor grammar" tag (at least 10 mistakes):

- Sentences should start with a capital letter and end with a "."., "!", or "?". This rule is violated everywhere, but I'm only counting it once. I'm not even going to bother with commas. (+1)
- p9: "I have idea" - missing "an" before "idea". (+1)
- p9: "Noelle san, if you didn't join me. I'll tell the whole squad what you did early~" - "didn't" should be "don't", there should be a comma after "me" (not a period in the middle of the sentence), "early" doesn't fit (maybe "earlier"?). (+3)
- p10: "what with the smerk!!?" - missing "is" after "what", should be "smirk". (+2)
- p10: "for your information I do this because you blackmailed me... there no way I ever do it with this bakasta!!" - should be progressive tense ("I'm doing this"), missing "is" after "there", missing "would" after "I". (+2)
- p10: "it amazing right?" - missing "is" after "it". (+1)
- p10: "you sweating a lot Noelle san." - missing "are" after "you". (+1)
- p11: "you sweating so much Noelle san." - missing "are" after "you". (+1)
- p11: "it so erotic" - missing "is" after "it". (+1)
- p11: "asta dick is getting smaller" - should be "asta's". (+1)
- p11: "it so big." - missing "is" after "it". (+1)
- p18: "look like you ready" - should be "looks", missing "are" after "you". (+2)
Last edited on 13 February 2021, 13:16.
Posted on 13 February 2021, 02:05 by:   Dnkz    PM
Score +91
@atasitian this is the official english

https://twitter.com/skwddwrd/status/1343645533919793152
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86618950 (purged, probably because uncensored)
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/61643897
Posted on 13 February 2021, 13:17 by:   atasitian    PM
Score +13
Oof. OK, thanks for telling me.

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