On page 18, I would have loved to put, I started working in a clinic for the elderly, but in the end I did not :v
page 16, already fixed, i`m sorry

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/bf12f1eb6c/864007-45

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P16 is in Spanish only

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just looking at the first couple pages... wow, a lot was lost in translation.
edit: the later pages doesn't look too far off though, it's standard sex talk after all

Last edited on 26 February 2021, 17:32.

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old dude felt so young, he started speaking spanish.

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What kind of English is this lmao

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"The old man, who was energized by the vitality of a virgin, later married a woman under the age of 35 and gave birth to her first child."

The old man was a seahorse in disguise confirmed.

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Huh. Woulda thought the old dude would've gone to jail since she's still a minor, lol.

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The bus finally came... and so did he.

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Jesus Christ -- this manga was first translated from Japanese into Korean, then into Spanish, then into English. No wonder a lot of things here don't make any sense.

For example, in the very first page, the translator put "What would happen if I put the plot out here now?" That's completely wrong -- she actually says 今ここで アソコの毛を出したら どうなるだろう, which literally means "What if I take out my hair down there right now?", or simply "What would happen if I expose myself here right now?"

I'm guessing the term アソコ, which literally means "that place" -- a euphemism for "pussy" -- had its meaning completely lost in the multiple translations, and somehow became "plot" instead.

The same error appears again in Page 2, where "plot" is used instead of "hair". Also, the "kanji" that the translator mentioned in his note isn't even Japanese. It's Korean. What she actually said was "Huh!?"

The third and fourth pages are just as bad, which makes me think this entire work is practically a lost cause.

Bottom line: if you really want to translate something, use the original source material instead.

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poor grammar tag - no point in trying to fix stuff here since it's been broken telephoned over and over again and none of the sentences likely retained their original meanings.

3 - What were you doing there, stand up, Sayako?
3 - Not, wait a minute
4 - He sits that way, there every day
4 - whatever happens, it just stays there, staring at nothing
4 - I'm more concerned about you than about that inspiration you have.
7 - After all! yes it was very exciting!
11 - UH? in Spanish, 3x
11 - Seeing the fresh body of a young lady every day, I felt young
13 - Soaking me like this, in a place like this...
16 - It's the first time I feel this sensation!

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IT was hotter when I didnt know the dialogue :(
I don't mean to what people saying tl's 'bad grammar', but the characte's conversation (I don't notice the telephoned-translation, stay ignorant, enjoy every tl).
Like, shouldn't this be tagged rape?

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