This is my first work, I know that the quality isn't good but I hope I can strive to do better in the future.

These are my favorite

Base +6, coleccionista903 +6, pesc +8, 44inf +6, NoizeTV +6

Raw here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1746650/6b3c7f2ef7/

Thanks for the translation. In your future work you should use the original resolution though. Your translated version is downsized to 1280x resolution from the original 1430x2000. It's not a huge difference I know, but if the raw was much larger as they often are, the difference would be quite noticeable. The reason this happened is because you used the resample version of the raw for editing instead of the original. It's also possible that you got the raw from another site. There are sites that copy galleries from EH in resample quality only and for that reason you should avoid using them as a source for your raws. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x, that is often a sign that something is wrong and you should check to make sure that you got the full resolution version.

For future reference, here are some ways you can download the full resolution version of any gallery from EH:
1) Torrent download, avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive Download and then click on Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download each page individually, use the Download Original Source link below each image you open in the gallery.

You should also use a more suitable font. Here's a forum thread full of recommendations on which fonts to use: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=190193. You might want to take a look at the Cove of Scanlators subforum (where that thread is from) anyway, as there are other guides in there that you might find helpful.

Base +13, pesc +8, TheNotoriousRPG +8, void-stealer +6, MC Arisato +6, destinyherowolf +5, Moronical +14, The Really Cool Guy +9, SCSS +19, bigscuba +6, Isolation_Q +9, Instaburst +6, bitchnigga +8, and 6 more...

WHy are you sinning by using comic sans.

Base +8, DOIHI3 +6, UWin +11, Braltewrakcus +10, Moronical +14, Winter-Bee -7, SCSS +19, El_Lazor +7, alphabetagama +8, Marz +6, Isolation_Q +9, Retconner -6, viniccius36 +5, and 2 more...

It's not a sin if he doesn't know it's a sin in the first place.

Base +6, destinyherowolf +5, Braltewrakcus +10, mindyourwords +6, Paizurikin +12, The Really Cool Guy +9, Winter-Bee +7, SCSS -19, 44inf +6, nayon +7, Retconner +6, Gabs999 +6, Boomer30569 -7

Cut him some slack, the first work is always like that.

From now on he can continue to improve his work, with good advice and input like klermun did.

Base +6, mindyourwords +6, Winter-Bee +7, SCSS -19, yeeyeeyeet +10, Instaburst +6, Retconner +6, ‗‗_ +6, rizkeith +6, Reson +6, Hyoros +15

I have read all of the comments thoroughly and I really am grateful for the feedback and inputs.

Thank you very much Klermun, I got the raws from a different site, thank you as well for providing useful resources that I can reference out of on my next work. I really appreciate it, I'll be a lot more careful on my next work!

Base +1, EvyL +6, Instaburst +6, Retconner +6, DeathReptile +6

Love this series

Base +6

Always appreciate any good translation, keep up the good work.

Base +6

Well, we definitely know who Yuzu takes after. Mommy is stacked!

Base +7