Hey guys, just uploading the first part of me and my friends project we worked on a year ago. This is only the first two chapters of a seven chapter mini series. But it is already completed, so no worries about it never being finished!

Relevant information about the writer and artist is in the pages. But will give you the original webcomic pages.

https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/monster-girl-carnival-living-with-oni/list?title_no=313124

https://tapas.io/series/MonsterGirlCarnivalLivingwithOni

This is probably the closest to the original vision I had for the series before having to censor it for different webcomic websites.

Apologizes ahead of time for the odd formatting since it was made for those websites in mind.

You can also notice the sheer amount of pointless monologues, which was my fault. The artist never removed them despite saying we could cut them in the final version. Kind of nervous to upload this here since I don't know what kind of reaction it'd get.

MMm i give 6 /10 the art can be better but i can get turned to it

The history its kinda generic but it dosnt mean its bad at all i like harems myself
When u are making a History u need to SHOW something that catch my atention, u know way too much text and no show something remember the most important thing I a History u want too Sell its a START that catch me and a end that conclude things u show in ur history in the middle have some up&downs... This is a H history so u should give some H from the start tooo much context and 0 action xD!

THe artist can Improve he its good but just need a little more, its diferent when people draw to Ecchi and for a Hentai.

U can see even Korean manhwas Hentai that have long histories compared to Hmangas they equilibrate History/sex so u Get turned On but the story its still interesting examples Drug Candy, Perfect Half, Sport Girls, Aharoo and a lot more Drug candy for example ITs really Hot and the history its interesting

Other examples like Sweet Gut / brawling go dont have a Good Story but the art its 10/10 so they make the sex ambient So fking good u get turned on easy even if the history is trash XD

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Thanks for the tips, the artist is trying to improve all the time. The reception here is better than I thought, so maybe in a week I'll post the next two chapters uncut, since it's sort of a pain to sort!

Want to apologize for the split galley. Not used to uploading here, so thought it would be better to upload it in chapters of two. Decided to fix that right quick, and hopefully the chapters 3-4 galley will be expunged.

Last edited on 04 March 2021, 03:16.

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