It's been 8 years since I first translated this story (wow) and with my recently finished Evelyn.3 and Evelyn.4 I figured it'd be a good chance to update this work as well and bring it up to the standard of the latest two chapters. I fixed a number of different things, fonts, typesetting, better phrasing, b&w leveling etc. etc.
Sorry for the double upload but e-hentai's system won't allow cloning for galleries older than 12 months, so I had to create a brand new one.