Hello, this is my third attempt at a MTL rewrite, I hope you enjoy this. Not sure if I should include the [gore] tag but...

This is actually actually less of an H-Doujin and more of a prequel to the author's FREE manga that he hosts on his blog:

http://mokusei2.blog46.fc2.com/

Unfortunately, due to low popularity (and being free I suppose), he was rewarded with extremely low sales. Thankfully, he started working on an indie game that became somewhat of a success. In fact, I believe he said he earned way more from the game than he ever did from his manga. Because of both of these things he stopped working on the manga. Sad, but I hope this gives both the author and manga a little bit more exposure. Thanks for reading!

The art is good but the story is cringe, non sensical and depressing.
Mind of a 9 years old with this body? Which psycho thought this was a good idea?

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@Extyr
Dude, your comment is the only thing cringe here. Just admit that you don't get it instead of embarrassing yourself like this.

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His game is called "Dead or School" and it's an extremely good metroidvania with RPG elements. It functions as a direct sequel to the manga. One of the best games i have on Steam, and one of the few i got all the achievements for.

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If only the actual manga was also translated, and not just the prequel here. @Runedude

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Even in our doujins sex robots have been outlawed :(

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"yOu FoRgOt ThE vAlUe Of A rEaL wOmAn" lmao, as if simply being a man or woman gives someone value. Cringe.

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