Hello to all!
Here is the second comic of 2021!

It's the sequel to Young Witches and tells what happened after the disappearance of the magic book.

We will follow the day of Hayate (now an old woman), Hina (now a young man), Chiyoko (now a young girl) and Toshimi after the four wishes they made.

And maybe their wishes did not go unnoticed.

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Can I get a TLDR overview of this please?

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They have very strange law here. Just because she was motivated by him being the prick, doesn´t really make him guilty of her doings, and she is still the one who used magic illegally. But authorities completly pardoned her and blamed him, solely on him being prick back then. Then they punish him and rewards others, including his sister who was the one crossed law here, and on top of that additionally punish him. I get it he is a prick, but that really isn´t relieving or offensive in face of law. Other than that it is good story. It just feel strangelly executed toward the end.

Base +1, Slaanesh40k +6, RandomAccess2 +6, Gorm +7, PregnantWhoreFucker -6

@moydirza Honestly that is my gripe with the story apart from the mother being pretty uncaring about the whole thing (also nothing was ever mentioned again about her liking girls despite the focus it got in the previous part)

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Yeah, that was really dark losing 20 years of his life and being dropped in essentially alternative universe inside what may as well be a strangers' body past his prime, stuck on auto-pilot half the time (unable to even control his body) and in state where he's the only one aware of these changes and likely stuck living like a servant for the two people who stole his life. OH AND he can't even enjoy his new body anymore (everything else was already boring to him in his state, including things he used to enjoy) because... he was an asshole kid with raging hormones, something common with kids who are not even 18? Meanwhile the girl gets a complete upgraded version of her brothers' life, the girlfriend gets everything she wants by becoming even prettier and getting together with the sister, and his mother gets an even better childhood than she had while reliving it.
The author's works get really dark sometimes, and it makes the experience unique (hope they never change), but damn do I need a good drink after reading these.

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Really I love your comments =)
And yeah I know, maybe the end was a bit rushed or too dark.

But overall thanks for your comments ^^

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Sorry if I come off abit negative, I really enjoy how unique your stories are and they do leave an impact on me.

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Really? Ugh, this is just...Too force and too dark ending, I mean, yeah the guy deserves some punishment but that was too much, the other members of the family are quite fine with their new lifes, the sister practically is enjoying everything that is happening to her, she is the one who crossed the line with the magic when there was another ways, but in the end she seems to be rewarded instead of getting a understanding of the situation, in some way she become worst than her brother, she is the one that also deserves to learn a lesson of this. Now he has to live a life that he doesn't want or even can't enjoy (If I was in his place, I would commit suicide, at least in that way, I will make miserable the life of the mother and sister), also, they could at least erase his memory so he doesn't have to suffer a so painful fate. The story has a good development but the conclusion is awful, I hope that I could forget about this story (Like the charaters at the end), please, don't be offended about my comment but if I don't do this, I will not sleep well by thinking about this =(

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Great until the ending, why was the sister rewarded and the brother punished by the magic division, despite the sister causing both magical events? Why was the mother so nonplussed about the whole thing? I wouldn’t feel so bad about it if the magic division or whatever cursed the whole family and made them all forget, but they unreasonably cursed the brother to make him remember his past life, and that he’s essentially lost 20 years of his life. Sure the brother was a piece of shit in the beginning, but it would be more correct to punish the sister magically and then punish the brother normally than this weird ending where she is rewarded for doing wrong

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p. 294 - You can tell that someone loves Stargate!

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Erase the memory of everyone who was happy with the change and leave the unhappy one as punishment for something that was unrelated to using magic? Of all the things they could have done that has to be one of the dumbest. The first part was a lot better.

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Terrible story and shit ending. The laws are backwards and inconsistent. The characters are uninteresting and unlikable. The boy was a prick but he at least didn't cause identity death. The boy didn't even break a law so they shouldn't have done anything to him. It's like if I rob you but because your a dick the cop arrest you and gives me your stuff.

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i mean this with all due respect, but why does everyone have fucked up peanut heads where the top half looks all swollen

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