Anything to keep the efficiency up

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I have no idea who did your translation but it's fucking bad. Like, rewrite levels of bad.

like immediately, the very first page: "This kind of thing... How can we treat is as normal..."

Source: いや～ そ そんなこと・・・ できませんよ！ "Nooo way, w-we can't do that!"

"Since I'm here right now, just treat me as one of your colleagues here in the Liyve Seven Stars."

Source: 私のことは。。。七星としてじゃなく 一般作業員として扱ってちょうだい ”Please... treat me as an ordinary worker, not as a member of the Seven Stars."

raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1863645/9060a706d8/

Last edited on 30 March 2021, 03:11.

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Base +37, mysto0 +6, freisuika +1, s0ulkill8r +37, Agent Bun +16

So why didn't this get a "poor grammar" tag?

Base +6, tomci12 +8, Kitouski -6

Daruna really came in here solely to shit on the translation lmao

Base +3, tomci12 +8, Natsam -14, MarlorZ -6, Kitouski +6, IncognitoMaud -6, Chunga -18, Hyoros -15, BetaCodeX -9, Glovelove. +19

We put out a version ourselves, use it as a comparison: https://e-hentai.org/g/1878895/822b684186/

I get that people are new and trying to learn, but there are dozens of places you can go to talk to knowledgeable people about Japanese help. Hell, scanlator discords/IRCs would of course be open to helping someone translate porn. When in doubt (and there had to have been A LOT of doubt for this one), seek out some help.

On top of that, something this shoddy with a Ko-fi advert attached to it in the back page just smells like shit to me. Like that's your primary purpose for doing this. And so yeah, I will absolutely shit on anyone who does something like that, just like I shit on Doujins.com for doing that, or any other chucklefuck from SEAsia who does MTLs with a patreon url in the credits page. That shit is a cancer.

My suggestion to you, freisuika, if your efforts are genuine and you're not MTLing in the hopes of scrabbling together some pennies, is to join some Discord servers with people who do translations. EHCove, Mesugaki, RedLantern... hell even my own Discord. Find people who know better than you, and use them to learn.

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@PsychicDoom Because it doesn't deserve it. Plain and simple. The tag description states this: "Any 3rd party translation containing at least 10 grammatical or spelling errors per 40 pages."
freisuika may be poor in their skill of deciphering moon runes but there English is pretty well off (based on this "translation").

Dialogue that can be improved on:
P.9: "So in order to link [us] to efficiency..."
P.19: "(I) Think I'll..."
The first should be fixed and the second could be ignored as informal speech, but Ke Qing is a pretty serious person. So it really depends on the original text.

Other things that can be improved on are the cleaning (some spots are pretty iffy and noticeable) and the spacing because it looks abnormal at parts (e.g. P.7 Panel 4).

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