Swing - Volume 1

https://e-hentai.org/g/1444261/cff86288e4/

ain't I a stinker?

Base +9

Yet another volume of how much the couple isn't into it, with the male lead overly jealous and female lead lying. Between this and sunstone it feels like the writer has some denial-play obsession of making the kink they are suppose to be representing in the work tedious and unbearable, neglecting all the fun and interesting aspects of it.

Base +10, qwsdcv +7, Polyglate -6, Detlev -5, Lord Zero 3rd -9, afffaf +6, Eckstar -5

@consentacle It's a flaw common to about 99 percent of western ero-comic artists. They love to overplay their hands regarding detail and lore and end up just alienating people from getting into the sex. Aya Yanagisawa is an example, as is the artist for "My Gardevoir Is A Pornstar", needing to come up with needless side-ups to justify or "add" to fucking porn. Kinkymation is one that I'd recommend, though, as they don't really spend boxes of texts on the "lore" of their world and just get to the meat of it.

Base +6, Lord Zero 3rd -9, biscardone -7, Eckstar -5