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[AI] My Dear Lord Part 3 (English)

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Posted:2021-04-26 14:13
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Language:English  
File Size:396.5 MiB
Length:333 pages
Favorited:102 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.67

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Posted on 26 April 2021, 14:13 by:   Sieght    PM
Uploader Comment
Hello everyone !
Here is the third comic of 2021 !

It's the sequel to My Dear Lord and tells what happened the day after the events in part 2.

I hope you'll like this story and I'll see you next month =)
Have a good read !

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And find all my comics on my website
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Posted on 31 May 2021, 00:25 by:   Bravely    PM
Score +28
Honestly, I feel you really lost direction with this series. The first volume was really good following the original Roderic and his gender change.

Volume two you really introduced a lot, and far less Roderick, but I appreciate you were trying to expand the story a bit, but went away from what made the first one really good.

Now here, it barely had anything to do with Roderic and she's only in a few pages. You went too crazy with the body swapping and possessions and really should have focused on the gender bending transformations from the few guards who had sex with her rather than just trying to squeeze in a bunch of different styles of gender bending.

Hope going forward you focus on one style of gender bending, and stick with the original character too. Shame how you shifted away from her so much.
Posted on 31 May 2021, 09:56 by:   Sieght    PM
Score +5
@Bravely
I understand, I tried to make each part a little different while staying in the same universe.
Posted on 31 May 2021, 12:57 by:   manucode    PM
Score +12
Agreed with @Bravely. On top of what Bravely mentioned about Volume 1, the CoC setting also makes the story quite interesting. There aren’t many artists / authors exploring the CoC world after Vipcations suspended their Corruption of Champions comics. I put Volume 1 into my favorite, but was a bit disappointed to see the story moving away from CoC and Roderick fading from the plot.
Posted on 01 June 2021, 03:23 by:   Bravely    PM
Score +25
Sieght, I would suggest saving such drastic style changes and different things like possessions and body swaps for spinoffs, rather than the story of Roderic.

It really feels like you wasted her character, she deserved much better than how you brashly ended her story with barely a few panels in chapter 3.

I hope you'll revisit this, or write a proper ending for her instead sometime. We're talking a world of magic here, so I imagine anything would be possible. ;)
Posted on 02 June 2021, 10:26 by:   Gizellelil    PM
Score +12
I have to agree with everyone else, I'm unhappy with the ending. You had a good story but the way that you dismissed the character of Roderick and allowing evil to triumph over good does not sit well with me. Perhaps you can rectify by coming up with an alternate ending?
Posted on 18 June 2021, 02:10 by:   Mistake    PM
Score +12
The first two parts build a character and here it's thrown away in a few pages with no closure, spending most of the time on the most boring characters doing random stuff. Pretty disappointing way to end the story.
Posted on 19 June 2021, 00:53 by:   motdurza    PM
Score +2
Here is my opinions for whole series. I do not know the CoC at all and I was here because I am trying to check any tf (sometimes also mc) thing there is. So I was not really invested into Roderick and first part was for me rather classic, yet somehow really good story about prince on hero crusade getting changed by chance and forced to cope somehow with it. Second part was somehow weaker, with focus getting change from one person to multiple, so there was less time per person. It seemed to be set up episode and that was okay. However 3rd part did not give justice to this set up. Plot keeps moving on and things that happens feels somehow unexplored and it remains such until very end with some plot treads seemed almost pointless. It kinda feels like this was mean to continue but author decide to cut it and call a day, and rushed the ending. Especially that older prince that went all the way there to just loose track at finish line (why bother?). On top of that, after whole part of set up, I was expecting something more than just simple body snatching and few murders. Seemed kinda like waste of several opportunities. Also there were few strange decisions made. For for Mc of final part was choosen characted that wasn´t present in first part and had like 20 page of screen-time in second. Also there were

However, there is posibility that this series is set up for another story. So maybe it will be explored eventually. But maybe not.

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