This was a Fiverr request to partially translate chapter 3 and 4 of Nyotaika Suieibu ~Ikutabi Onna ni Nacchau Ore no Karada.
This is a section of chapter 5 and 6
https://www.fiverr.com/wandererkitty/translate-japanese-manga-or-doujin-for-you?source=order_page_summary_gig_link_title&funnel=b64b29388d97429b9231f6497bf5d3ae

Note: I want to add proofreading feature to my comissions. If you're looking for a job, please get in contact with me on fiverr.

Grammar issues for the tag.
Page 3, 2 errors: "Is it okay for me to enter men's bathhouse" is missing a the there. "Upperclassmen went to shopping", the to is unnecessary.
Page 4, 1 error: "by the way, my sausage haven't boiled yet" hasn't not haven't.
Page 17, 2 errors: "you really became a woman, don't you" didn't not don't. "But you can't just stare it like this" missing an at there.
Page 22, 2 errors: "Doing from the back" missing an it there. "I'm so close to lose my mind due to this pleasure" losing not lose.
Page 23, 1 error: "I can feel it what's going on as good as you" the it is unneeded.
Page 24, 1 error: "Your cock gives pleasure to all over my body" this is just completely mangled, the simplest fix I can think of is to drop "all over".
Page 29, 1 error: "Holly shit", holy not holly.

Other issues.
Like the previous work you uploaded, you're using "stupid" where "idiot" would be more natural. Page 23 is probably the worst about this because you use idiot appropriately and then switch right back to stupid.
You're also inconsistent on "upperclassmen/senpai".
"Return to sex" is another phrase that just sounds weird in English, despite being grammatically correct.

You did better than the last work, since 10 was hit on the last page, but you still really need to get yourself a proofreader.

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You want to add a proofreading “feature”? Proofreading isn’t a “feature”- it’s standard. You aren’t fluent, and your translations are inaccurate. I feel sorry for anyone getting scammed by you on fiver.

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Where is Chapter 6?

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