the original Japanese can be found here

https://e-hentai.org/g/989884/c933dd29a1/

this was something I translated as a part of a trade with someone

if you are interested in having something translated, feel free to send me a message on the forums.

any comments or critique on the translation or typesetting would be appreciated

who's the artist on pages 23-24?

(and if anyone is wondering, page 22 is namidame)

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@Railander

the last page says hato and then a kanji that I can't make out, hope it helps

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@Railander
Guest: 涙目天国氏. hato氏.
I think 涙目天国 = @namidame_h.
Don't know who hato is.

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maybe hato is actually referring to hata? though the art style doesn't seem similar...

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