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Is this machine translated? I honestly always wonder what's going on when I read stories that have writing like this. Is the author not able to speak English, so they rely on blind machine translations and just hope for the best? Do they honestly think they're writing in good English? Or are they a native-born English speaker and this is their honest best?

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She is totally going to give that dying old man a blowjob, isn't she?

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nice, she might use her ass to suck out the poison

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Angel page 14

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You really got to be a hardcore sakrua fanboy to like this B.S.

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as soon as gramps was laying there you knew she was gonna fuck him and you ruined it by making it so

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Lot of pantyshots, i like it.

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What panties? lol

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To KainBrain
Don't see anithing wrong with the english used.

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Native English speaker here and yeah, there isn't anything particularly wrong with the English used in the comic. It feels unnatural probably due to the writer not being a first language speaker himself, but it's definitely not wrong. The English here lacks contractions that we use on a daily basis so seeing text written like this feels like it was formatted by a computer.

So where was I... oh yeah, big booby Sakura ftw

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This is dope

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this would at least have been more accurate and interesting with tsunade or ino

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So boring...

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Honestly, @Kainbrain.
It could honestly be any of those. I've seen native english speakers who make a shitton of spelling errors.
So all of those scenarios are equally possible. But more importantly, naked Sakura,

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The first 6 pages, as well as the 5 pages with Temari, are unnecessary.

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I loved the Yuri scene, it was AMAZING

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He should focus just on violent dom Temari.

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If the poison could infect Sakura, why did she say she'd suck it up in the beginning?

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I hope Sakura give me medicine too 😍

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Ah, seeing the sequel, nah, none of the pages are unnecessary. Although I think maybe Naruto shouldn't have fucked Sakura here, to make it more eventful when he fucks her in the sequel.

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樱哥真美。哎，鸣人为她付出了这么多，最后却没得到她

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