Translation : Hatsuka
Typesetting : 『』ET
Proofreading: Yukikaze

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I'm sorry with previous translation, it has SO MUCH grammatical error because i can't find proofreader at that time of translation. Now hopefully this version is better than previous version.

edit: fix pages order
edit2:fix little typo, thanks to meow_pao for correction

If you look up justice in the dictionary, this is what you see.

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fckn dickless rito deserves worse than this tbh

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The only harem Rito deserves is to be part of someone else's as Riko.

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If there is series more perfect for ntr i want you to point me to it, seriously i just love To love ru ntr, for some reason you can't help but want to see Rito ntred xD

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The "poor grammar" tag requres at least 10 grammatical or spelling errors in 40 pages. This one has 7-8 errors on the FIRST PAGE alone.

Here's a corrected version of the first page. I'd do the rest, but it would just give me a headache.

YUI: Yuuki-kun... I'm sorry.
YUI: I've misjudged you all this time. I'm sorry for calling you shameless.

RIT: Huh? What's wrong? You're acting strange today.
RIT: Well, as long as that's cleared up, I'm happy!
BOX: Yes...

BOX: When compared to HIM...
SAR: That idiot Rito. He hasn't noticed us at all.
YUI: Don't...
YUI: Why are you forcing a Disciplinary Committee member like me to come to school in this swimsuit?
BOX: Yuuki Rito...
BOX: You aren't shameless at all.

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Not only poor grammar this too short come on Terasu MC sensei please expand your NTR story more.

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The king of dense harem MCs deserves it, or rather, the girls deserve better than to be led on like aimless dogs for so long.

Also Rito doesn't have girls, that implies he has the balls to get with anyone.

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@joseliski
Well in the official artbook, he is quite active if he just chose one, even shameless route if he picked Mea or became like the principle if he picked Nemesis.

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I may as well fix the grammar on the rest of the pages, since I already did the first page.

P2:
MOM: Hello, Rito-san? I wanna talk to you about the Harem Plan...
MOM: Yeah... I'm putting an end to your role.
MOM: I hope you'll understand.

MOM: As of today...
MOM: I'm officially cancelling "Rito-san's Harem Plan".
MOM: Let's forget it ever happened.

MOM: Okay... now let's start the real thing.
MOM: "Saruyama-san's Harem Plan".

P3:
BOX: One month later...
MOM: Okay, I'm taking the picture.

SAR: Hey, come on, Haruna-chan. Don't be shy; look at the camera.
HAR: O-Okay.

BOX: Saruyama-san's amazing. It took Rito so long to make Haruna-san his girlfriend, but he was able to steal her away in such a short time.
BOX: He even fucked her ahead of her ex-boyfriend... so cruel!
BOX: Fufu... Rito-san...
BOX: I can't wait to make all the girls around you get a taste of Saruyama's dick...

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Didn't know there were enough monkey fans to want this.

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@Red 55
Terasu's hateboner for Jump will keep him going.

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I like Terasu art but damn his works are all so short I don't even have time to get boner.

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look at this angry cucks getting mad because rito has girls and they dont how pathetic you can be this site is full of cucks and thats obvious in the type of people who get most likes

look at godslave, orion9137 or adrian_v crying because they doesnt have a girl but rito have a lot such shameless cucks

look at this angry cucks getting mad because rito has girls and they dont how pathetic you can be this site is full of cucks and thats obvious in the type of people who get most likes

look at godslave, orion9137 or adrian_v crying because they doesnt have a girl but rito have a lot such shameless cucks

look at this angry cucks getting mad because rito has girls and they dont how pathetic you can be this site is full of cucks
look at godslave, orion9137 or adrian_v crying because they doesnt have a girl but rito have a lot such shameless cucks

disgusting cucks

Last edited on 26 September 2020, 04:48.

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Cause one random dumbass who does nothing useful is any better than the other random dumbass who does nothing useful. poor NTR either way.

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jesus FUCK the internet hates rito. i have been saying for years since this show came out i would get around to watching it at some point. I really want to, simply to cross it off the ol anime list. was he really that bad? anyone whos seen the show please lemme know. I personally enjoy harems but ill admit its annoying when the mc always pussyfoots around. It's why i really enjoyed RE monster, dude gets a harem of monster/human girls and legit has sex with ALL of them and its a huge happy harem.

again, i'm honestly curious why hes so hated to SUCH an extent. is it really just that hes a pussy? what makes him worse than other harem mcs?

ps. high tier art tho 5 stars!

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Chapter 5 will update on October guys be mentality prepared.

p/s got replied from the author...

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哦我的上帝啊，这也太短了吧，虽然很好用谢谢

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这个梦梦太戳我xp了

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Well our mentel already wreck... so any new page to add.. ehehehe XD

Damn Yui looks like a Muv-Luv Total Eclipse's 1st Lt. Yui Takamura

Last edited on 24 November 2020, 01:32.

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He's such a beta protagonist that i dont even feel sorry for him. Well deserved i say

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Hahahahhahaha yes!!! I love this particular NTR! XD

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@whitesauceoflove I agree, just watched this series and all the OVA's and I have to say never seen a beta male protagonist this terrible in years almost regret watching it now, finding every excuse in the book to not... have a harem... of beautiful girls that are willing to be with him don't have the words to express my frustration with the character hah.

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@Fenrir26
Exactly my feelings!
Check this out if you like https://e-hentai.org/g/715374/47927e3d1c/
It has 4 parts in total XD

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Your proofreader did a good job on correcting the original translation. There are, however, a couple of spelling errors -- probably mistakes introduced during typesetting -- that you may want to fix:

P09
"Opportunities", not "opprtunities".

P10
"Disappeared", not "dissappeared".

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I thought that was Gohan for a second.

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这波啊，这波是一直被压迫的猿山反杀梨神，建议小暗和梨子（？）也安排上www

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Damn i didn't knew there was new pages to it! I hope he will continue and that we'll see a full harem for saruyama, lovingly kissing all the girl he stole

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@theboredotaku don’t know why you’re getting downvoted so hard for simply asking a question, anyway the reason rito gets so much hate is because He’s one of the early harem protags introduced to us and it set the premise of Alyssa mc who refuses to even choose one girl when so many are blatantly throwing themselves at his feet.

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@theboredotaku

Ah yes, Rito being hated is a product of a variety of factors. Number one is his out dated archtype. The dense, clueless, and to top it off indecisive. This type of MC has fallen out of favor years ago. I honestly don't know why anyone would like this type of MC. I suspect it's to carter to a very specific target audience, young teenage boys who long to have beautiful girls fawn on them but have little idea on what happens after that. Authors probably didn't want to alienate them by showing relationship progress because said young teens might not be able to relate to making progress in a relationship due to their lack of experience. This is just speculation though.

Another factor for Rito being hated is the over abundance of really attractive females throwing themselves at him. He's absolutely spoiled for choice drowning in a sea of girls yet makes no progress with any of them. Not even Momo's harem plan really goes anywhere throughout all of TLR:Darkness lol. To put things in perspective, Saru NTR's 4 girls off of him in this doujin but he literally might not notice at all because there are 10+ more throwing themselves at him everyday. A person with that much luck with girls shouldn't have any excuses keeping them all waiting. If he either made progress with one main girl or went full harem there would be a lot less hate for him.

Rito not choosing either one girl or all of them alienates the fans of every girl but also makes him hard to relate to. He also has no hardships or aspirations that serve as an excuse or good reason. For example, Issie from Highschool DxD had some serious mental trauma that stopped him from actually trying to pursue his harem dreams in the beginning volumes. When he resolved those issues he put his money where his mouth was. Uesugi from Gotobun no Hanayome didn't focus on romance because he was too busy studying to secure a chance at a good job and support his family.

Rito is literally supported by a Galactic Superpower and lives life with a platinum space spoon in his mouth.

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@meow_pao
Thanks, we will correct it for next translation!

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would've been better if it was some muscular bald chad or a fat bastard. Instead, it's that dumbass-looking monkey that's still kinda an mc due to his beta-tier physique that you'd normally expect from weak and dumb male main characters.

Last edited on 24 May 2021, 09:24.

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I would have enjoyed more this with the school principal, space alien orc or some random gyaru-oh since I can't take seriously this guy. He's just too much of a joke man, what was wrong with casting the principal? That man also deserves to score bros

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TBH Most Harem MC are so fucking betas they almost deserve to get NTR

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But all harems have the pussy protag refusing to pick a girl

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So much salt, pretty hilarious how jealous many are of rito.

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Fucking hate Rito, he only deserves a female or femboi role in Principle's harem.

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Excellent work, great translation - thanks for sharing it with the community

Waiting for more translations of other works of this great artist, as well as other works that have not yet been translated

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