Edited with English translation

I guess I can't complain about the typesetting for this, since I was too lazy to do it myself, even if I am somewhat disappointed in it.

That said, it looks like your translations are lifted almost directly from my notes on Danbooru. There's several recognizable quirks from how I do translations on Danbooru and even some of the text formatting is the same. I don't have any problems with people using the translations I post on there for typesetting like this (and would've loved to see a more proper typesetting of this work in particular), but a message on Danbooru asking first or at least some credit for where the translations came from in the upload itself would've been nice.

Even if (in the unlikely event) these aren't my translations, credit should still be given where it's due.

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pg 14, "The underwear in wearing" -> "The underwear I'm wearing"

pg 24, "wouldn't lat me go" -> "wouldn't let me go"

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I noticed non-greyscale text somewhere. Advice - if you use greyscale text on greyscale pages it will allow better optimization of the image file. You might even get lossless PNG with less file size than the original JPEG source.

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I applaud your file name choice, very helpful with sorting...
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