Page 004 suprise -> surprise
Page 005 opportnity -> opportunity
Page 021 it can't be help... -> it can't be helped...
Page 031 distrub -> disturb
Page 034 a alot - > a lot
Page 043 gibbrish -> gibberish
Page 044 while its filling -> while it's filling
Page 047 2x imporant -> important

Base +8, ValiDoLL +6, GO_KENTA +16, Entei Nevermore +6, MC Arisato +6

"Yo hold up homie, you finna gon make me act up"
"Waddup? Wanna come? You gonna blow your load?"
"That semen just be straight bussin!"

Thank you, Nintendo Treehouse

Base +9, Master E +6, ValiDoLL +6, Ahryman +6, Gabs999 +6, Quflow +7, MC Arisato +6, Alonevpk +6, Jackrakan97 +6, SuperGenericAnon +8, Poire666 +6, coolmanbis +6, Xalren525 +6, and 9 more...

UPDATE: Please do not put in the "poor grammar" tag. The uploader corrected all the grammatical errors that were pointed out in the comments and updated the gallery.

Here are some other grammatical corrections you may want to consider. Feel free to use them if you plan on updating this gallery.

P02
"A hot spring and good scenery", not "a good scenery".
"I'll hold the fort here" is the correct idiom, not "handle the ports".

P03
"All of a sudden", not "all of the sudden".
"The chairman" is the proper term, not just "chairman".

P07
"Into you", not "in to you".

P09
"Are you sure of what you're saying", not "Are you sure what you're saying".

P14
"Feel them up", not "feel it up" because she's referring to both breasts.

P16
"Skilled in" or "skilled at", not "skilled on".

P17
"Mess them up", not "mess it up" because "insides" is plural.

P20
"I thought I could hold it", not "I thought I can" because it's in past tense.

P21
"After all", not "afterall".

P22
"There's also another side" or "an other side", not "there's also an another side".
"Breaching in" isn't wrong, but "putting it in" is a more natural-sounding phrase.

P23
"I'm lost for words" or "I'm at a loss for words", not "I'm loss for words".

P34
"I want him to touch me down there so badly", not "I badly want".

P37
"Especially if it came from a girl like me" or "Especially coming from a girl like me", not "Especially it came from a girl like me".

P40
"I'm holding on for dear life" is the correct idiom, not "holding my dear life".

P41
"Every part of my body is screaming for joy", not "Every part of my body screaming in joy".

P46 and P49
"After all", not "afterall".

Last edited on 07 July 2021, 01:05.

Base +37, MC Arisato +6, Shank +44, Tarball +13, Vanguard3125 +6, oheye +9, rockingoldensamurai +7

Why is Idolmaster Leon talking like Curb Your Enthusiasm's Leon?

Base +15, PuddingCups +6

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1776916/9263a233a3/

KOR: https://e-hentai.org/g/1777486/c7e10f56b3/
CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/1836001/98f68bd767/

Base +20, Shank +44, Miles Edgeworth +64

The art look great, but the slang used here and there is B O R I N G

Base +10, Wakiro -6, Braltewrakcus +10, ACHnt +6, oheye -9, Leathude +9, PuddingCups +6