toki! mi lon kulupu Sekrit_Klub! mi ante sitelen unpa li sona toki pona tan ni: tenpo ni mi sona toki pona. mi tawa!

This translation was entirely done in what is likely some of the most broken Toki Pona ever written. Toki Pona is a conlang consisting of a simple grammar and a dictionary of 120 words or so, and I wanted a little practice piece. I hope you will learn Toki Pona along with me, as this will likely not be the last translation I'll do. If you do Toki some Pona and you spot obvious errors, please criticize me in the comments; it's the only way I'll get better.

Next - Prolog, Erlang, and COBOL!

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1065467/021403cd94/

ENG: https://e-hentai.org/g/1084945/ae13529eb5/
CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/1050088/f6c67f843a/
BRA: https://e-hentai.org/g/1249340/670d944a96/
KOR: https://e-hentai.org/g/1277259/907a9379f6/
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Last edited on 06 July 2021, 06:07.

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Wot in tarnation translation.

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On page 1, the admiral says “pona, tan mi kama tama e sina”. “tama” is not a Toki Pona word, it should probably be “tawa”.
On page 3, Naganami says “sina toki pi suli kin e seme...?”, which is supposed to mean “What are you talking about?”. The “pi suli kin” doesn’t seem neccesary to me, I’d probably translate it as “sina toki e seme...?”
I like the fact that you’re translating Naganami’s moans to Toki Pona as well, but on page 6 she moans “aeh”. “h” is not a letter in Toki Pona.
On page 7, Naganami says “lawa pu kulupu utala”. “pu” means “having to do with the official Toki Pona book”, which is one weird thing to talk about when you unpa. This should probably be “pi”.
On page 9, Naganami says “tawa o!”, which is supposed to mean “Let’s go!”. The words are in the wrong order, it should be “o tawa!” Though, this one I’m mostly fine with.

Yeah, this is some pretty broken Toki Pona. Translation in fun, though.

lon lipu nanpa wan, la lawa toki “pona, tan mi kama tama e sina”. nimi “tama” li nimi ala pi toki pona. ni wile e toki “tawa”.
lon lipu nanpa tu wan, la jan Nakanami toki “sina toki pi suli kin e seme...?”. mi pilin ni: nimi “pi suli kin” ike. ni wile e toki “sona toki e seme...?”
sini ante pi toki pona e kalama unpa. mi pilin ni e pona, taso lon lipu nanpa luka wan, la jan Nakanami kalama “aeh”. sitelen “h” li sitelen ala pi toki pona.
lon lipu nanpa luka tu, la jan Nakanami toki “lawa pu kulupu utala”. fuck la toki nimi “pu” li nasa. ni wile e toki “pi”.
lon lipu nanpa luka tu tu, la jan Nakanami toki “tawa o!”. lon nimi li ike. ni wile e toki “o tawa!”. taso ni ike kin ala.

a, ni li toki pona pakala kin. taso ante toki li musi.

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