If this is how mangaka learn how to draw their material, it's no wonder Kentaro Miura passed away at 54. That's a lot to go through.

Base +15, TheMasterOfYou +7

Tied up in a body of water is a good way to drown. stay safe kids.

Base +7, Master E +6, BionicRalpher +6, bunnygunny +17

left aligned text is a no-no. always use center alignment unless when necessary.
and never, ever use ms paint. use paint.net or gimp.
for fonts try wild words and its variations for starters.
please update this one with fixes before working on another.

Base +18, TheBrojangles +6, slimedog +10, flash11 +22, subz3ro +17, BionicRalpher +6, Ass Spanker +23, elementalanubis +6

Like already pointed out, sorry but your typesetting is garbage.
Here are some links for you where you can learn how to improve:
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
http://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/index.html
https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
It shouldn't take more than an afternoon to learn how you can typesetting much better than this.

And some suggestions for free comicfonts: Anime Ace (not the pretiest or easiest to work with but popular), Komika, Wurmics Bravo, Wurper Comics you can download them for free at sites like dafont.com.
And PLEASE stay away from Manga Temple. It may have manga in its name but its ugly and unpleasent to look at.

An advice for all aspiring typesetters: Using MS paint for typesetting is like showing up to a gunfight with a spoon. If you don't want to spend money on Photoshop you can download GIMP for free at gimp.org

Last edited on 31 July 2021, 19:07.

Base +18, flash11 +22, subz3ro +17, BionicRalpher +6, Ass Spanker +23, elementalanubis +6, dankestdungeon +21

Thanks for the tips! This will be very helpful. I think I won't be able to fix this though because this has been reposted in many hentai sites already for everyone to see my blunders lol.

Currently at 40% of pages 59-82 of https://e-hentai.org/g/1141961/8f7eebb777/ . I guess I'll apply the things you guys shared and go back from scratch

Thanks again!

Base +1