I saw a translation of this posted on the site just a few days ago, and I actually felt a bit insulted while reading how horribly it'd been put together.
This is my first upload to the website, so I apologize for anything in advance.
Mostly just made this to satisfy my own ego rather than anything else, but I figured I would also share it (again, to satisfy my own ego).
If you've any criticisms or comments, I'm open to hearing them, cheers.

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Wow, this is leagues better than the old one, but while reading this I couldn't help but wonder, are you perhaps british?

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ayy more sleep rape got translated, nice.

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It's still a little rough around the edges, but I agree that it's not at least unreadable like the first one, and you aren't asking money for this like the other was either.

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As someone who has sleeping sex fetish, your translation bring joy to my life...

Seriously, I lost a ton of brain cells when trying to read that shitty translation.

Moreover, the font is cancer and I nearly need holy water to purify my eyes. lol

One more time, thanks for the better translation. @Detram

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I think you are mixed up Mother-in-law and Stepmother which should be the word I should have used on my "horrible put together" translation version (well even I agree I failed in many other parts and the typestting was bad because I lacked good fonts)

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@HKE Yeah, I did this in pretty much two sittings to finish it as fast as possible as I've a shitload of stuff I'm doing right now, and when I looked over your TL it wasn't wrong in most cases (some omitted important parts of the dialogue itself, but not inherently wrong.) So for a good amount of them, I just restructured what you'd already said, and "mother-in-law" slipped through the cracks, entirely to my own shame. There's also "i" instead of "I" mistakes everywhere, which I should've caught over my brief PR'ing. You're free to DM me on the forums if you need PR work done (I'm a lot better at PR'ing other people's work, less personal bias), because I'd be glad to do it.

@Otaku1111989
The previous TL isn't wrong, in most cases. There's a few instances of thoughts being attributed to the other person, but these ones can trip a lot of people up due to how Japanese is structured, and the context-based nature of a lot of the dialogue itself.
Like I said before, it'd my first upload to the site and I reeeaallly rushed it, but I just wanted to give the gallery legibility over anything else.

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