Source: https://remora180.fanbox.cc/posts/2672618
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Nice, sexy and 100% fappable.

I find the shadowing (almost all Remora's works) very enticing and in the mood for some lewd stuff.

I must admit Genshin impact material of this quality is keeping increasing steadly (if it keep going it will tie with kantai collection).

Now, im just awaiting for a Doujinshi with Amber's Doll as the main character... That doll is really a Free for all spree.

Thanks for uploading.

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Mildly annoyed with honorific -sama behind keqing, while i just heard kokusei all time on it in japanese. Personal reference i guess

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very naise.

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this is just like genshin impact

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changed it

Last edited on 02 September 2021, 06:02.

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r/KeqingMains is probably crying tears of joy right now.

This is a step in the right direction and an improvement over your last translation (at least for the English), so congratulations.
Your typesetting has improved to the usual standard, and your cleaning isn't bad, but it is noticeable in some spots.
Examples of said cleaning/alterations:
P.1: There is some blurring near the first dialogue box and the bottom part of her skirt/dress is blurred out for no reason.
P.5: Her hair clip could use some better cleaning near the first text.

Also, Your English has improved considerably compared to your last release but there are a few things that you tripped up on:
P.1: There shouldn't be a period after "I'm so sorry", instead it should be an exclamation mark. Alternatively, you could just remove the period/exclamation mark and just change the period after "for you" to
an exclamation mark instead and it would read just as well. The difference here is that if you put the exclamation mark after "I'm so sorry" it emphasizes that sentence and gives the dialogue a pause.
If you only place an exclamation mark at the end, then the dialogue reads faster as if the speaker is frantic and was in a hurry until he just arrived.
P.2: The "of" in "Strange choice of present" should be "for a" instead.
P.2: The sentence "I guess I will try it out for you" is not really a question instead it's meant to be a declarative sentence. There is context to this situation: KeQing is portrayed as a tsundere in this doujin, so
in this case, she's trying to pose the sentence as a suggestion instead of a declaration. Also, there is no suggestion to be made to the protagonist, and no further reply is required from him.
P.2: "A unique undies" should have the words "pair of" in between "unique undies".
P.7: "But you'd already shown me" should be "But you're already showing me". The original sentence is in past perfect tense which refers to an action completed before another action in the past. It should
instead be in present progressive because she just made her "lovey-dovey face" and will continue to do so.
P.10: The phrase "we kept making love with each other" should be either "we kept making love to each other" or "we made love to each other" because there are two people involved ant it's in past tense.

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This artist carries the Genshin doujin industries on his back, every single one of them is a 10/10... they're on the shorter side but the quality makes up for it. I hope someone translates the Barbara, Hutao, Eula and Mona ones too. Thanks uploader for this one already !

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