Oh man I love MTL that can't even tell that 子達 with furigana アンリマユ isn't referring to "children," but Angra Mainyu. MTL is always great when you combine it with the complex world of the Nasuverse, after all.

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I didn't MTL it... I didn't notice that, my bad
(Ah, just noticed the thing you mentioned, didn't notice it.)
Anyways, I've messaged you, send me a message when you're around

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I've replied to your message. The mistake I pointed out isn't the only mistake you have, but it is a major one that appears right at the start of the book. Even ignoring Angra Mainyu being the actual implication the author so helpfully points out in the furigana, 子達 isn't "children" in this context anyway, so either way you were wrong. You have poor grammar and inconsistent punctuation throughout on top of questionable translations.

Translating books about the Nasuverse is very difficult, which is why generally I don't do it. But it's also why any translator will have to be very careful about doing so, because otherwise...well, this.

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Tnx for the TL. It's good to get a Nasuverse-familiar TL, but you are doing well.

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tbh i was expecting the scene when Rin facing that shadow tie her up. but sadly nope.
thanks this for doujin, it save my imagination

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This finally, FINALLY gets translated, and it's a mess so janky it might as well be done by Google. What a sad day.

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@Red
Fuck off you sycophant.

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