This is the final version of the Gang Bang Theory Comic, inspired by the hot Penny. Please let me know your comments, and i hope you enjoy it!

I think it would be a big help if you showed the work to a proofreader before releasing it. A lot of the words you use make no sense in the context and the grammar is constantly varying degrees off.
To be honest, anyone who's good at English could improve it. If you know a person like that, invite him over for a beer and a meal so he can help you out. I'm only suggesting this because the amount of text literally would take less than an hour to correct.

The renders are top notch. I only found a continuity error on page 11-12. Her mascara was running on page 9 and again on page 14, it should have been running on 11-12 as well.
I think I know which model you used for her head in Daz3d, I've seen it before. I like it.

Using real images on page 2 with the disclaimer was not a good choice. There's a huge difference between 3d and real life rape and the reader could momentarily get the wrong idea.

EDIT: Found the place I've seen her before: https://f95zone.to/threads/the-office-wife-v0-75-pre-prerelease-j-s-deacon.44541/
Obviously both you and the other dev has made some changes from the base model.

Last edited on 20 September 2021, 08:42.

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Hi AtotehZ, thank you very much for the excellent feedback, I will publish a new version with the corrected grammar, this time i was a little overconfident with a new AI powered translator.

About the models actually you are right! they look pretty similars, i used a model as base and i applied facegen using Penny's Photos as model in DAZ3D and mixed it up.

Thanks again for all your comments, they are very useful!

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I'm a little confused. Somehow the better version was replaced with a worse version. Could anyone else try to confirm that? I'm almost certain the current version is the one that was also released first.

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