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[Digital Flyer (Oota Yuuichi)] Neko to Geboku II | A Cat and Her Servant II [English] [zack#8415] [Digital]

[Digital Flyer (大田優一)] ねことげぼく II [英訳] [DL版]

Doujinshi
Posted:2021-10-10 15:12
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:21.01 MiB
Length:34 pages
Favorited:1152 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.42

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Posted on 10 October 2021, 15:12 by:   zackmob    PM
Uploader Comment
I am still learning japanese so I cannot guarantee to you
that the translation is contextually correct or appropriate.
I did this because I love this series.

You can support the artist by buying a digital copy of the doujin.
at this link:

https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/list/=/article=maker/id=78112
Posted on 10 October 2021, 16:32 by:   wolfspitz    PM
Score +54
The translation on this is very broken, you really shouldn't use machine translation.

If both your english and japanese suck then commission someone else to translate it instead of this.
Last edited on 12 October 2021, 10:33.
Posted on 10 October 2021, 18:35 by:   Darksword696    PM
Score +64
Posted on 13 January 2022, 00:52 by:   atasitian    PM
Score +69
Some spelling and grammar mistakes:

[p2]
"You found yourself a special servant, don't you?" -> "didn't you"

[p3]
"That servant I want to meet him!" -> missing comma or dots
"Sure I don't mind" -> missing comma

[p5]
"That's it right!?" -> missing comma
"Come on beg me!" -> missing comma

[p6]
"you can bear it with today" -> "you can bear it today." (no "with")
"Looks like it you are already" -> "like you are" (no "it")
"Everyday after school on the rooftop" -> "Every day"

[p8]
"There can you see it?" -> missing comma

[p9]
"I'm always so desperate so I don't pay much attention" -> second "so" should be "that"

[p10]
"She is beautiful right" -> missing comma and question mark

[p11]
"Wow it's so big" -> missing comma and exclamation mark
"The aphrodisiac I feed you is working." -> "fed"

[p13]
"Hey we can't go that far..." -> missing comma

[p17]
"Wait for moment let me rest..." -> "Wait a moment, let me rest..."

[p21]
"You just lay down." -> "lie"

[p23]
"Please no more..." -> missing comma
"Never dare to to use" -> only one "to"
"I will make your dick for my pussy's shape." -> ??

[p24]
"It's look like" -> "It looks like"
"your are" -> "you are"
"is that you are thinking" -> "is what"

[p25]
"My hands are moving on it's own" -> "on their own"
"I too can't stops" -> "stop"

[p29]
"too strong for ordinary human" -> "humans"
"still in the effect of medicne" -> "still under the effect of the medicine"
"until you show up and kick him" -> "until you showed up and kicked him"

[p30]
"I wake up when you kick me." -> "I woke up when you kicked me."
"No matter what the reason" -> "No matter the reason"

[p31]
"In future" -> "In the future"
"wihout" -> "without"
"for first time" -> "for the first time"

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