Hi i hope you like my first hentai comic!, maybe in the future i will add another chapter!

I like the art, it is simple but it has its charm. The dialogues are weird, but you can understand the story easily.
The story on itself is kind of boring. When you have read one of those netorare type comics is like you have read all of them.
I hope I can see more of your work in the future.
Thank for sharing this with us.

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thx i think that the dialogues are preaty broken because the original work was writen in spanish, so my bad was traslated all the comic in english with google translator, i will improove my stories in the future this is my first job after all, so thanks for your comments!

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