Translation is awful, cleaning is awful, typesetting is awful. What else to say?
Edit: can't wait to see this dumbass downvote me to prove my point. I checked some of his galleries and he loves to downvote people who criticize his uploads.

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it does look off, losing some nuance

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I'm sorry for not doing this very professionally, I'm just trying to translate some artists who I feel deserver more attention. I tried looking for better fonts, but I couldn't figure out how to install them onto my device, I'm sorry if it looks bad. also I never downvoted any comments, so I don't know where you're getting that from :(

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@Jack Woods: Check page 21 then tell me what's right about it. I'm not even talking about the accuracy of the translation, which I also have doubt about considering his past of rewriting works. And I'm not gonna type an essay listing all his errors out here if he is not willing to learn from it. If you bother to check his past uploads, others have left very helpful comments but to no avail, so I'm not gonna waste my time.

edit: I checked the raw. My point above, I'm not gonna type an essay out here but if you wonder what is wrong with this upload:
- sentences translated incorrectly (this is akin to a rewrite rather than translation, completely rewritten to satisfy his impregnation fetish), now tell me how the fuck you can translate "金玉枯れるまで出ちゃった" into "That's enough for today." and "今日はもうおしまい" into "Please get pregnant!"?
- Inconsistent capitalizations,
- inconsistent punctuations,
- complete lack of redrawing,
- bad font (that he has been using since forever),
- text overflowing over bubbles at times,
- etc.

@impregnationlover: I should have taken screenshots of your downvotes on ZRQ's and atasitian's comments eh. Now, you might not know this, but there is this website called archive.org that takes snapshots of other websites and archives them for future reference, so you might want to check that out https://web.archive.org/web/20211031221929/e-hentai.org/g/2031938/0f75356164/

If you want to view the page but you are on sad panda, you know what to replace in the url.

edit2: He already deleted his comment but if anyone is wondering what he said, it was something along the line of "I never downvoted others, not sure where you were getting all the downvoting thing from", which is absolute bullshit if you check the archive.org link above.

Last edited on 07 November 2021, 15:04.

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raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1899753/494dac7b99/

I opened this to a random page - page 24 to be exact - and checked a single text bubble, the middle-left panel, left-hand bubble.

Raw: 膣内の動きは妊娠を望んでいるように感じた
Actual translation: The way her pussy was/is moving felt like she/it wanted to get pregnant.

This idiot wrote: "It's her duty to be impregnated!"

This is a complete and utter rewrite. I'm confident in agreeing with what Ass Spanker said; this person rewrites dialogue to adapt to their own impregnation fetish. I, too, have such a fetish, but there are so many books that actually satisfy this kink that there's zero reason to actually do what this uploader (apparently regularly) does.

I've added this to the Sloppy Seconds pile, we'll get around to it. Very likely after Christmas.

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