Translated this manga on my own because no one did. Hope you guys enjoyed it. Coli and Chill

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/d89e3bba51/1220200-250

NOTE: I'm not sure about the accuracy of my translation but I'm pretty sure that I've butchered the grammar. I fucking hate grammar.

A Barlun translation ? Wtf ?!

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Decensored would make this literally perfect.

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As you mentioned, there are quite a number of minor grammatical errors, but none that really detract from the reading experience. Still, you may want to have someone proofread your work next time.

Here are some corrections for the first five pages. Feel free to use them in case you plan on updating this gallery.

P01
"It's been two years since I started living in Tokyo". "Since I lived in Tokyo" implies he left Tokyo two years ago.
"Comfortable", not "confortable".
"Started to crumble", not "start to crumble".

P02
"If you had free time", not "a free time".
"This day and age", not "this day of age".
"Say that so easily", not "said that so easily".

P03
"She's been staying", not "she stayed". The latter implies that she already left.
"She bought them", not "bought it", since he's referring to multiple toys.

P04
"Spend my money", not "spent my money".
"You got mad", not "you get mad".
"You liked to be hugged back then", not "you like to be hugged back then".

P05
"Hasn't changed", not "haven't changed".

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@meow_pao Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. I'm well aware of my poor grammatical skills. Maybe I should try those free grammar checker websites.

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