Narration goes in rectangular boxes. Not unanchored ellipses.

Base +6

The rules only apply to people who learnt the rules, while you must understand that not all are educated enough to follow rules. Should let people simply have fun.

Base +5

Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

Base +8, yupokamusi -6