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[Princess Cage (Nanakichi.)] DECHAU 3.0 [English] [Digital]

[Princess Cage (七吉。)] DECHAU 3.0 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2021-11-23 19:23
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Language:English  TR
File Size:44.17 MiB
Length:32 pages
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Posted on 23 November 2021, 19:23 by:   lastresort2020    PM
Uploader Comment
Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1473172/4cdbd436a8/
Dlsite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ263459.html
Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/733761

We now also have a PayPal and a patreon so we can buy better quality or obscure material in the future.
https://www.patreon.com/lastresorttranslations

I have noticed that some people use my English translations for their own Languages, That's absolutely fine by me.
If you want a cleaned version just send me a message, this should save you a lot of work.

Still looking for proofreaders (Sorry if I don't respond quickly on E-hentai)

Very special thanks to SSJGregorywho did the cleaning and typesetting for this one.
Posted on 24 November 2021, 03:15 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +43
For someone looking for proofreaders, you're doing a pretty good job with your grammar. There were only a few minor errors in the first section:

P4
"Neither studying nor clubs are anything that appeal to me", not "appeals".

P6
"In the sight of the public" or better yet "in public sight" or "in public view", not "in the sights of the public".

P7
"I'm about at my limit already" not "my limits".

Feel free to use them if you plan on updating this gallery.
Posted on 25 November 2021, 06:58 by:   PalladKnight46    PM
Score +6
@meow_pao

I believe the page 4 sentence is grammatically correct, as "anything" is a singular pronoun, though if I were the PR, I'd be inclined to change the sentence as it's a tad awkward. Maybe simplify it to "Neither studying nor clubs appeal to me that much."

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