Seeing as it was already uploaded, I was considering starting a petition to expunge. However I didn't, why? Although the first page is missing and it's a duplicate... The image quality is much better than the older version, the old version was a bit blurry. Also, while both this version and the old version are both censored, this version is less censored and easy to uncensor. So my suggestion is that we add that missing page and replace the old version with this version instead.

Here's a link to the old version: https://e-hentai.org/g/176322/b374b2c896/

Base +8

My suggestion is that we don't replace a perfectly good old version with a new version that has several grammar errors.

Base +6, swordpaladin +9, The Naughty Shrink +6, Elusi +6, limisgood +9

@Xalil:

This supposedly "superior" version has inferior grammar.

P04
"This whole situation", not "the whole situation"
"This sucks", not "This suck".

P06
"Have these", not "have this", since she's referring to her boobs (plural).

P08
"If you prefer it like that", not "If you prefer like that".
"That cosplay suit", not "This cosplay suit", since he's referring to something in the distance.

P10
"I can't put out my hand", not "I can put out my hand".

P12
"Makes me sick", not "make me sick".

P16
"A few seconds away", not "a few second away".

P19
"Today's job", not "Today job".

Base +37, Elusi +6, herpderp5545 +8

I suggest this is a duplicate of [KON-KIT] Bitch Trap [English] {doujin-moe.us}
https://e-hentai.org/g/425845/3915f16be4/

...and there's a decensored vesion here: https://e-hentai.org/g/526046/c7e044b7fe/

Base +11