Hello to everybody, im a self taught artist that wants to go full in deep with the creation of gender bender/feminization and transgender nsfw comics. i have follow the genre for many years at this point and i want to fill that void that most gender bender porn have the lack of full HRT feminization transition. if you like my art and want to help in the production of more of this, i would really apreciate if you can support me on my patreon:https://www.patreon.com/Marquis_de_la_Soroye

Did you paint this? Like, with an IRL paintbrush? That's a lot more effort than I'm used to from the artists here.

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hi, no, i just learned how to do it with 1 brush in photoshop, yes it takes a little more effort than the classic proccedure, but i really like adding the colours and paiting it like an oil painting.

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This is well made, and the art style is so unique! I can't wait to see more.

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Your art style is great but let's be real page 6 doesn't happen in real life. It would probably be the tranny getting decked by the guy and the guy getting pissed and making a scene.

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hahahahahha probably, life is hard,although i wanted to give it a good vibe xD. out of jokes i will probably be making some shorts and a trans journey II will be made around half december, so i can do more research about real life relationship, i already know what scenes and everything to do atm but guess i will be go deep in r/asktrans and r/traaaaaans just to get that real life vibe relationship

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page 6, totally happen in real life, while what you describe still happens and it's a big problem (one of the reasons why I don't date cis men really), more often than not it doesn't happen, as long as you communicate with people.
btw please don't use a slur to describe trans people, that's like a big no no bruv

And to the author : I really like your style and the little shorts are nice to read <3 keep up the good work <3

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many thanks :D, this is the reasson why i also want to keep doing this line, to bring something positive since life can be hard.

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Dialogue/text is a bit wierd, but the art is pretty well made! Good comic and quite unique for this site, well done :)

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Why would a trans woman be referring to herself as "not a real women"?

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Because, even myself being one, there are moments of depression that make you feel shitty. sometimes is not because something bad happened but how life is going, and how sometimes things can be harsh or questionable why life have to be that way (why not being directly born as a women). the idea of page 6 is show up the feeling of insecurity that Trans women suffer because of dealing with common problems like losing friendships and family, being insecure of yourself and the meaning of life ,in this case im adding her couple as a pillar that actually help her in dealing with the existential issue. Also gender disphoria is a bitch , the dysphoria doesn't really dissapear, but HRT helps erasing a big chunk of the depression and make the person feel alive gain. For the chapter II (new story, new caracthers) i will try to explain the deep meanings in a more suitable way.

Thanks for the question help me realize some issues to improve :D

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Damn didn't know u were a trans also is tranny a slur cause I have a coworker who's a girl turning guy but she literally calls men in women's clothes trannies but she does refer to herself as trans. Also my coworker only started her transition like a month ago so, we all knew she was a lesbian but she came out to us before Halloween. She's super lucky cause her name is Danielle but everyone called her Dani for years and she's keeping her name. Last thing I gotta say is I'm a minority and for real pg6 is literally gambling with yours life if your not careful. More then a few who came out too deep into relationship and not one case I know of where dude didn't get pissed and hurt the partner except for the white couple. I'm being 100% from what I've seen and heard come out to your partner early don't wait on it cause it never ends well.

Pretend my she's are hes

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Beautiful and interesting art style but you should work on your typesetting a bit, it's really distracting because you have this gorgeous art marred by this really plain font

Honestly if you just simply:
Changed the font to what you used in the title page,
Made the white bubbles semi transparent so we could see the art underneath
And did a little spell checking on your text (capitalization/punctuation/etc.)

It would do so much to improve the look of the comic as well as let your art shine through more!

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Damn, HRT did wonders on her.

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If you're trying to make fetish content for us, and not wish fulfillment material for... Mentally challenged... Throw all this to the side and start over. If however you want to make wish fulfillment, this is also TOTAL GARBAGE. But I do REALLY like the art style no matter which way you slice it. Its different, its challenging, its messy. Refine it to make it unquestionably your own.

That said. If you wanna make wish fulfillment, you need way more plot, dialogue, characters, and re-occurring ideas. Nobody is going to get emotionally invested in a time jump to some character professing their love for another. That's like waking up one morning and its already happily ever after. SNOOZE! You won't be making any money from me or others until you can deliver the emotional setup you're trying to sell. Literally look at almost any other highly rated western comic on the site. Look at what they do, and consider, really think about how their story, characters, and dialogue work. The point is not just to convey your ideas. But its to entertain the audience, to get them to spend time reading your work.

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