Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2067904/7066d78ed3/

Here are some suggested corrections for the first ten pages. Feel free to use them if you plan on updating this gallery.

P04
"Where you can fully concentrate on improving" or "where you can fully concentrate on getting improvements", not "where you can fully concentrate on getting improving".

P05
"It'll just be us girls" or "It'll be just us girls", not "it'll just be us girl".

P06
"She's in the bathroom", not "She in the bathroom".

P09
"She did catch us in the act" or "She caught us in the act", not "She did caught us in the act".

P10
"Oji-san already has enough stress", not "Oji-san is already has enough stress".
"We'll just have to rape you", not "We'll just have rape you".

Base +37, CaptainFlint +5, naxusnl +21, Vulture_ireng +14

man sleep rape is the best, those girls face when they naturally became aroused is so cute.

Base +15, GreenIN +6, starlyte8 +6, rotar zairo +10, wtfidonteven -6, AnjouHaruki -6, TormacEvacuation -7, BS™ -5

@naxusnl Thanks for yummy sleep rape translation.

Got any plan for this one? https://e-hentai.org/g/2074370/f434b9bc99/

Since you already translated other 2 prequels.

Base +6, BS™ -4