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A little low in quality, this. The scenario isn't bad, but it's quite cluttered and the text is too haphazardly written to read.

Base +2, kikimaru024 +21

He does have some nice angles and I really liked his art style, and the auster color scheme does in fact help with the overall quality of the piece bring out the wood details nicely. While the poses and angles are in good variety than others that just do standard stuff.

However, as Otneimica pointed, it does have an unfinished feeling to it, the many sketch lines weren't cleaned in fact it because the cluster of many images in the same panels and text does make it look like a better sketchbook to text position and scenarios than any finished product.

It has the potential to do really better.

Base +6, kikimaru024 +21

Yeah i Agree with Otneimica and Demongordon
The english is really not his strong point
and the art is sketchy as fuck
But tbh was quick sketch, took maybe 10h in the whole CYOA, unpaiud, so you know...
=D
BUT
i do quite better quality now! Go follow my patreon!

Base +7