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Please get a proofreader, this sounds very unnatural.

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I understand this is a first TL project, but like A0_ said, please get a proofreader and maybe a translation checker while you're at it too.
You've got the subjects mixed up and even missing parts starting from the very first page. Just a few examples:

1. the advisor isn't talking about himself in the second panel, that's Sayo stating what happened ("you were fired from your position as the ARCHERY - not kendo - club's advisor due to sexually harassing girls") and missing the second half of the text in the final panel where he says he'll start choking Sayo if she tries to scream
2. on the next page, the ugly bastard isn't talking about HIS body "acting that way", but rather telling Sayo "your body is reacting this way, you're such a lewd disciplinary committee member"
3. P7 -> literally missing half of the sentence again. "what happened to your fighting spirit just now? does my cock feel so good you can't speak at all?"
4. P22 -> not "wow damn it" but rather "you're too loud, now stfu"

Etcetera etcetera.

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