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[Fuuga] Sono Tobira no Mukougawa - behind the door Ch. 4 (Fushidara na Ani Imouto) [English] [KenGotTheLexGs] [Digital]

[楓牙] その扉の向こう側 第4話 (ふしだらな兄妹) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2021-12-05 12:27
Parent:2078065
Visible:No (Expunged)
Language:English  TR
File Size:18.44 MiB
Length:33 pages
Favorited:379 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.36
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Posted on 05 December 2021, 12:27
Uploader Comment
Did some corrections thanks to a fellow with a good eye.
"Some minor corrections you may want to consider using, in case you plan on updating this chapter":

P04
"Mine", not "mines".

P08
"Drank", not "drunk".

P19
"Crying, screaming, and distraught", not "crying, screaming and being distraught".
"Looks like", not "looks likes".

P21
"Take all the clothes that were in there", not "Take all the clothes that was in there".
"I'll fill you in", not "I fill you in".

P27
"Wouldn't", not "woudln't".

P31
"When we weren't aware", not "when we wasn't aware".

P32
"Turn this over to the police", not "turn this in to the police".
Posted on 05 December 2021, 10:25 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +54
Some minor corrections you may want to consider using, in case you plan on updating this chapter:

P04
"Mine", not "mines".

P08
"Drank", not "drunk".

P19
"Crying, screaming, and distraught", not "crying, screaming and being distraught".
"Looks like", not "looks likes".

P21
"Take all the clothes that were in there", not "Take all the clothes that was in there".
"I'll fill you in", not "I fill you in".

P27
"Wouldn't", not "woudln't".

P31
"When we weren't aware", not "when we wasn't aware".

P32
"Turn this over to the police", not "turn this in to the police".
Posted on 05 December 2021, 12:19 by:   ケンGotTheLexGs    PM
Score +7
Thanks, I knew something felt wrong on P19 and P31 but I completely missed the others even after rereading it many times. I'll update it now.
Posted on 06 December 2021, 23:56 by:   JukanX    PM
Score +35
Is it too much to ask to look up the difference between doujinshi and manga? All of your recent Fuuga galleries got recategorized to manga...
Repeatedly letting such basic things slip by doesn't exactly inspire confidence that you know what you're doing, you know...
Posted on 07 December 2021, 00:14 by:   jal100    PM
Score +10
I'm in for the (real) plot didn't even fap
Posted on 07 December 2021, 07:01 by:   LettermanZA    PM
Score +6
This is getting good. Thanks for the translations.

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