http://yitexity.deviantart.com/art/Savage-Company-Page-1-627238958

Chapter 1

Chapter 2 https://e-hentai.org/g/2086770/1481b6a22d/

Chapter 3 https://e-hentai.org/g/1142811/47547b1056/

Chapter 4 https://e-hentai.org/g/1338084/96f3f2e803/

Chapter 5 https://e-hentai.org/g/1545565/bb466e9dd7/

Chapter 6 https://e-hentai.org/g/1869016/c9f50abd6e/

Chapter 7 https://e-hentai.org/g/2294510/f5c96f40c0/

2-10-2021

Updated Pages 21 -28 & 56 -69

More Rewrites, in fact, a nearly complete RETCON of the original story. Much of the plot is no longer canon and never occurred in the new story RETCON. The first chapter got the whole George Lucas treatment.

So here's the skivy on what canon and what's not;

CANON:

-Numbered Pages, no subtitle

-Pages marked with the "Modern Rewrite" subtitle.

Non- CANON:

-Pages marked "Original"

-Pages Marked "First Rewrite" Those are the first retcons, which have also been retconned. XD

The corresponding page that a new page retcons is also listed in the page's subtitle

The Current incarnation of this story is now,

Pages 1 - 5, then 21 - 28 and finally 56 - 75. Everything else? DIDN'T HAPPEN

Artist Reasoning:

This rewrite should make savco a bit better in terms of story. Less filler, less confusion, less edgyness, and less happytown. (lol) If you liked Savco because of any of that, you will be disappointed by this new rewrite. But fret not, the old pages will be kept and archived.

This rewrite covers chapter 1, one scene in chapter 2, and two scenes in chapter 3. And to prevent drawing chapter 1 for a third time, I converted episode 1 in comic format. The rest on the other hand have been redrawn.
One thing you can learn from me is to write your stories first before you create them. Had I have done that in the first place, I would've left the original pages as is despite the lower art quality.

Hope you like this clean retelling of some parts of Savco! -Yitexity

Interesting. I didn't think this needed a rewrite, I understood what was going on. Was there a reason for it? Also I am going to be disappointed if they retcon Nick's browsing history roast, that was deliciously evil.

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@I4chuga

That happened, but now Judy only becomes aware of it in the second chapter. Which kind of makes sense, she was so embarrassed when it was revealed in the second chapter, even though she should have already known about it.

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