that cover art is *chef's kiss*

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Tfw you remember Abby is around 5'3" meaning she is in fact taller than a good chunk of female servants and this is rarely depicted

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Raw
Chinese translated by 黎欧x新桥月白日语社汉化
English translated by Valachlad (You are here)

Thanks.

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Should've said "Master" rather than "Gudao".
Cannot take that seriously as a name

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Something like leader or ringmaster would have fit just fine.

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Might have forgotten that he does have a canon name since I didn't play in a while. My bad lads. Anyone wants to reupload and replace the name feel free.

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Huh, is this the original Abigail? Shouldn't she be calling him Ringmaster-san instead of Gudao then?

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She is calling him Ringmaster in the RAW, it's a mistake. 座長 isn't a name, it's a word. I think there were some things that weren't fully grasped, probably due to not being familiar with Abby's unusual in game lore. The Abby we met in the story left on a journey, and the servant Abby we summon to Chaldea is different. In an interlude we learn that the original Abby can in rare cases possess the servant Abby's body to meet us again, and we recognize her because she calls us Ringmaster since we were posing as a group of traveling performers in the story.

On page 5, when Abby asks if the other servant Abby is doing fine, Gudao answers her, saying that servant Abby is having fun. On page 6, Abby doesn't want the servant Abby to think of her as a nuisance (for possessing her body again), but knows that servant Abby will forgive her for being bad since they are same person. On page 8, after saying she wasn't good enough, Abby notes that even though she decided to go away, and even though she decided to endure, she still couldn't stop remembering the time they spent together. These seem to me the biggest culprits where the English version doesn't flow quite right.

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