This gets far too confusing. It's nearly impossible to follow who is supposed to be in who. Which is made even harder by the pages being out of order. Also.... the body swapping power doesn't even work the way that it is displayed. And if two witches kiss, nothing happens, the effects of their powers both just fizzle out.
Art 4. Plot 4. Sexiness 4. English 5. True to character 3. All out of 10.