art 9/10 creampie picture 10/10 story 7/10 (good but kinda generic)
my only real complaint is more with these 'naive girl' doujins in general. how does she know it's called a cock. if anything she would call it as penis. probably having taken sex ed and all.
I just love these kinda stuff. Its so adorable, and much better then all the rape stuff out there. Dont mind the little details man you re making ur own life less fun xD