Damn tanned tomboy by Herio, amazing

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AH YES HERIO + TOMBOY + TANLINE = ASCENDENT

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heart eyes again

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two empty bubbles on page 3.

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page 21: "Will never going to" --> "Am never going to"
Page 24: even realize"d"

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This was fast, wanted to commission this :D

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Tomboy big tittied childhood friend?

10/10 stars

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1. Please export black and white images as greyscaled PNGs, not RGB jpgs. This is to a) avoid artifacting; b) preserve quality; c) de-bloat.
2. Watch out for dust (text remnants). Your bubbles are filled with them.
3. Punctuate and capitalize. You HAVE to punctuate in English, even for comics and manga. I know JP never punctuate minus the odd ellipses or question mark. This doesn't apply to English. Put periods at the end of your sentences, and commas where they need to be.
4. Typesetting could use some work (your text is way too big). General rules: text size should always match the original. Try to center your text. Make it aesthetically pleasing, but also try not to hyphenate like a madman. Guide below.
5. You often don't redraw. Please redraw.
6. This is filled with typos and overall horrible English. Tagged as poor grammar.
7. Your translation is stiff as fuck. Like, reeaaaaally stiff. You didn't MTL this... did you?

p.1 got a chance to talk => get a chance to talk
p.4 watch a porn video => watched a porn video
p.4 and i've lost count how many times we had sex => and I've lost count of how many times we had sex since
p.4 Whoever found a lover first we would stop these "practices" => This doesn't make sense. Did you mean "whenever"?
p.5 It's really bothering my club activities => It's really interfering with my club activities
p.5 Just from my nipples alone already feels so good => ...Really? Complete lack of punctuation doesn't help.
p.7 That is off limits! i've said that before, didn't i!? => This is off limits! I've said it before, haven't I!?
p.7 You do the move => You do the moving.
p.8 It's like dipping into a warm water => lol
p. 21 Will never going to => Am never going to
p.24 even realize => even realized

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

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empty bubble on p16

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Holy shit dude, are you Sonic the Scanlator? That was fast! Thanks!

Edit: now that I’ve actually read it, this is *usable*, but yeah, like others are saying, it could use some work. Nothing another edit couldn’t fix.

Last edited on 18 December 2021, 03:40.

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Yum vanilla.

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Atang, niatmu baik tapi hasilmu masih kurang. Aku lihat mungkin masih pemula, aku pernah jadi pemula juga. Kalau ada kontak mungkin kita bisa ngobrol?

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God bless Herio

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Like what cutegyaru said, Atang's grasp on English is tenuous at best. I hope someone else redoes this.
There's also two bubbles with missing text on page 3.

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Fuck off and stop translating. You clearly don't understand English.

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TANNED TOMBOOOOOY!!!!

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oh god , oh yes

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That's some pretty mangled English.

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Wow, this """translation""" is an insult to herio...
I'll redo this, but I won't rush it like this jackass.

(edit) here's the link: https://e-hentai.org/g/2089195/03140397db/

Last edited on 19 December 2021, 16:28.

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>tfw no brown skinned big booba tomboy gf
Why even live

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Bitch was playing mind games with him. They had an agreement and she undermined it due to a lack of good faith. Should've cummed inside her then ditched her for his own good. No way she wouldn't be a manipulative bitch if he dated her.

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